Reviews for Lit Up
NerissaBlackwood chapter 4 . 10/21
Wow I absolutely loved this story. I had never heard about synesthesia before, it definitely makes for an interesting storyline.
ShortofWords chapter 4 . 8/27
This story is amazing! The synesthesia really adds an extra layer to the descriptions and the whole thing just fits perfectly together. You're absolutely brilliant and this story is like a precious diamond.
RedVelvet chapter 3 . 7/19
Damn , i mean, im a kind of newbie here.
I dont know that fanfiction could be as hot as fvck haha,really enjoyed it !
Guest chapter 4 . 5/8
oh my fucking god, this was beautiful
linnfromia chapter 4 . 4/1
I really enjoyed this - the synesthesia added so much to the descriptions, greatly enriched the sex scene and everything else. Mike's embarrassment & desire for privacy, Harvey's confusion melting to (unexpected) tenderness, Donna's bright teal - you have a Whole Lot of very nice touches throughout. The ending (magenta fireworks, take your damn pills, you're like a lemming, sun-warmed ccrimson velvet) is positively triumphal. You capture a whole life together through the colors Mike sees/touches/smells.

I am going to subscribe to you just in hopes of getting that Harvey POV. I'm kind of out of fanfiction just now, but that would be so worth it!
PippaFrost chapter 4 . 2/1
can i ask for Harvey's pov? pretty please? i really wanna see how freaked out he was by the seizure
PippaFrost chapter 3 . 2/1
AppleL0V3R chapter 1 . 1/29
Holy crap! It's been a while since I've read something description-heavy that's engaging and paints a vivid image/scene in my head. I've never heard of synesthesia but reading this made me really curious and wanting to read more fics with it. You did a really, really good job with this short story, and thank you very much for writing it.
thingsthatmakeme chapter 4 . 12/21/2014
This was wonderful! So creative and absolutely beautifully written! I loved it!
thingsthatmakeme chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
POOORN! Really well done and excellently written. You definitely shouldn't worry about your dead grandma - I'm sure she'd thoroughly enjoy it. Bad joke? Probably. Excellent chapter? Most definitely. I love this story! It's amazing :)
Armana chapter 4 . 6/15/2014
Beautiful. Like a painting with bold colours that don't clash but come together to create an image that haunts you long after you have stopped looking at it.
thank you for taking the time to write this.
Anaethen chapter 4 . 11/20/2013
Your work is so beautiful! :3 This is the more stunning lemon I've ever read! Well actually, it was more art than basic porn :D The colors, the tastes, the sounds, it gives a quite moving esthetic to the story :D Synesthesia is indeed fascinating, and it suits Mike a lot (seriously, his brain is just so fucking amazing *o*)
I hope you'll write some more Harvey/Mike fictions
Individual Narrative chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
I loooooved this. What a great idea! It was so cool to see you playing around with the imagery to best convey Mike's synesthesia. It's said that synesthetes love their abilities because they feel they see/experience more than the average person, and I thought your descriptions of the world as experienced by Mike conveyed that really well. Also loved the plot, of course, and the way Donna was portrayed. Awesome job!
Izzy848 chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
You write amazing sex scenes my darling! Don't doubt yourself.
Shadowed Violin chapter 3 . 9/13/2013
Yeah, so I skipped graphic scenes-all of them-, but I loved the bit where Harvey was all understanding with Mike and his synaesthesia. Great job with that.
Um, with the M scenes I can't actually review those, but um, yeah...
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