Reviews for Shea Butter Isn't All That Innocent
karaburnes chapter 74 . 10/16/2013
OMG - I wish you had finished this one
Rumpelstiltskin-wait chapter 33 . 6/10/2013
you really should involve the team more...like sure to have Eli helping them out but Gibbs and McGee would definitely be helping them move into the house...
Lliaaame chapter 74 . 3/28/2013
I have just read all of your story all at once and have really enjoyed it! One thing that has been bothering me about this is: wheres the team?! What does Gibbs have to say about their relationship? Will he be the godfather? What about McGee? Tony must talk to him about him and Ziva. Ducky must have TONS to say about it all, and Palmer would probably have an insensitive yet hilarious comment on Ziva's pregnancy. I see you have focused a lot on Ziva and her (blood) family, but now i believe its time for Tony and the team to shine! Maybe some group dinners, half-days at the office, and just general spending time together! I love the small scenes with Abby, but I think they would spend more time with their more-than-just-DNA-family. And I kind of doubt that Ziva would cry as much as she does in the story. I understand that she is pregnant and the hormones and stuff, but Ziva is Ziva! She doesn't cry that much! Try to save it for special times :D Overall great story! And if you want more detailed ideas just ask!
Vanilla-Apples-n-IslesP.T.S chapter 74 . 8/9/2012
Idea#1. Early delivery...
Idea#2. Bcuz I think tiny is an ass... Maybe he cheats on Ziva... But then I don't want to cause her harm...
Idea#3. Monique comes into play a little... Maybe pops up out of the blue. Maybe just as the babies are being born...

Idk I'm like totes In love with this fiction, cannot wait for you to write more. IDC if you use my idea or not, just random ramblings I am hyper lol hyper-piper hehe
ncisaddict123 chapter 74 . 2/11/2012
Love this story :) N'aww Tony and Ziva are gonna have babies :') I don't know why but i love it when they argue like in her dream and make up a while after they argue because i feel as if it makes them stronger :) Thank you for writing amazing stories love them all :D can't wait to read more!
Robern chapter 73 . 1/23/2012
weird dream, still a good chapter though.
VampHunter001 chapter 74 . 1/22/2012
Well as enjoyable as this story is... Aside from the random happenings over five months im not seeing much of an actual plot... It's a good story but IMO you need to speed it up just a bit... This is NCIS even if it's fanfiction and it's always been about the team, the whole team. At this point the team has only had some minor roles to say the least. Perhaps a few time jumps to get us closer to delivery... Maybe some more about the mystery of the abandoned stuff... Plus she has opened up to tony about every thing so far... Why not this? You could even tie it into a case that brings the team back together... Just some thoughts hope they help...
Canada Dakota Faith Haswari chapter 74 . 1/15/2012
Ziva goes into labber does not want Tony toll touch her but finds that she loves him no matter what and he helps her though it and explain everything
Canada Dakota Faith Haswari chapter 48 . 1/15/2012
Thank you this was a good scene love. It
Lag111 chapter 73 . 12/28/2011
How about Tony takes Ziva on a small trip to New York and they spend a few days away from NCIS. Then, when they get back, Ziva can bring Abby the diary and ask if she can find them. She should also ask Vance about her father"s murder and if there are any leads. Maybe the killer can be whoever was supposed to be the director of Mussaud.
Aj00 chapter 74 . 12/26/2011
I don't have any ideas for right now (connecting to the last chapter), but I have really enjoyed the story. Anyway,

Ideas:

-the twins learn to speak many languages (Hebrew, Italian, etc.)

-twins take some kind of ninja fighting class (when they are older)(karate, judo, etc.)

-Nettie comes back and helps with babysitting

Good luck!
Tiana chapter 74 . 12/26/2011
Your next chapter can be about ziva confronting gibbs. Then after abby go and send mcgee and tony after eli's can take 2-3 day and ziva can stay with abby in the mean while. Them to can talk about zivas new life and how abby and mcgee maybe getting together.
Lag111 chapter 29 . 12/25/2011
Can you put the translations of all of the Hebrew and Italian? That would be really nice. Also, I love the story. It is so good. I squeal every time I read it.
Tiva4eva95 chapter 73 . 12/23/2011
Soo glad u finally updated! :) please remember this story and update Soon :D
earanemith chapter 14 . 12/23/2011
hey, it's me.

Long time not spoken :D

I saw the new chapter and I completly forgot what happened in the story so I am reading it all over again. Right now as you can see on chapter 14 stil loving it :D

btw. I may have asked you that already but how again do you speak/read what ever hebrew?
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