|Reviews for Slow Motion|
| ZoeyT chapter 1 . 2/14
Sweet story. I can see it clearly and it would mean so much to Jess. Thanks for a warm moment.
| Cheryl Ford chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
Lovely story! Loved how Jess loved both Andy and Mike!
| barbara chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Such a sweet story/ Thank you.
| Diane chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
Very warm and engaging. You perfectly captured what is important, and what makes a family. Thank you for this delightful story.
| twobrothers chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
Love the way these individuals chose to become a family. You have captured that essence perfectly!
| Ann chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
That was lovely, thank you.
| jude322 chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
i love this very short story. as i read it i could picture the scene just as clear as if i was seeing it. the underlying theme of laramie is the relationships between the characters. this shows the one between jess and mike perfectly. thank you
| Sierra Rose 22 chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Such a sweet story. How true that a child has a certain scent. The love between them is so touching.
| TheKingsDaughter chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Very sweet story:)
My sister said you posted a different laramie story then deleted it...can you repost it?
| sb4ever chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
| Freedom4America4ever chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
I love this story! Its not blood that makes us family, its love.