|Reviews for A Chronicle of Fate|
| TMNTurtwig chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I don't know where you're going to take this because adding a forgotten ninth tactitian hero doesn't change much by itself. I did notice the addition of a twin sibling, so I assume he or she will be inserted into the main story at some point, but as for the ninth hero... the only thing I can think of is if from beyond the gates he is remembered and recognized in the young tactitian.
| Hyralc chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
so are you completly skipping the scouring or what?
| Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Hey man! Just wanted to drop by to tell you that this isn't a bad beginning for a story. Keep it up! Just a note, though, be careful of making the protagonist a Marty Stu-the stuff about the "ninth hero" is kinda...well, lends itself to that sorta thing. XD But yeah, nice work :D