Reviews for Why is He Sitting In the Garden?
Epeefencer chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Fun little Ficlet, I can really see this scene playing itself out.

Just one little thing, when Harry is telling Ginny about the non-relationship he had with Cho, it would be a "consolation" to Ginny (a comfort), not a constellation (grouping of stars).

Other than that I found the story a delightful one.

Thanks for sharing it,

Steve
GinnyLilyPotter7 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
awesome! great! can you continue it, please?
lilyluna13 chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
This is amazing and u should def update!
Molly Rosie chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
can you continue this PLEASE
fleeting chance chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Haha! It's cute I like it!
gryfinndorluv chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
luv the ending lol
Jazzy Girl kataanglover chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
LOL
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Sweet story idea! I'm so glad Ginny got her heart's desire! :)

This could use a bit more proofreading though. Ginny's full name is Ginevra, not Ginerva; consolation, not constellation; Harry and I, not I and Harry; you're in love; my relieved expression; down there, not 'down their'.

Very nice kiss(es) between H/G, and of course Ron would be the one to notice their hand-holding under the table! :) I wonder how the twins reacted to that piece of news? :D
Charlotte1823 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Haha I loved reading this! It is really good! You are a very good writer!
Hufflepuff Chaser chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
That was cute! :)
q.thews chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Nice one, lovely evil end ;-)

If i may say it (and if i'm not the wrong one here), you have a "your" in place of a "you are" when Ginny starts speaking with Harry.

Ciao!
Becca chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I can't wait for more chapters! Excellent story! :)
Ginny-T-Potter chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
the ending was perfect... just PERFECTO.
StPeppersGoldenEggClubBand chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
cute! i liked it!
Nicolaeve chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
thats really good, and cute