Reviews for Small Voices
PamperedKitty chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
Great one piece. Enjoyed reading it, thank you
Japanese and Chocolate chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I'm quite sure my heart melted along with Helen's. You really captured how worried I think Helen would be about Ashley, a side we see very little of in the series.
dry-shampoo chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I liked this little story. It was a good idea and written really well.
Samisim chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Nice little ficlet. Much enjoyed!
Surreal Squirrel chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
"Sometimes the small voices drowned out the larger ones, and a whisper overpowered a yell." - Brilliant. I SWEAR. *hand throw*
Misery Loves Sarah chapter 1 . 8/15/2011

Blown away here.

Fantastic piece. I've been reading your stuff for a year or more now and I am just so impressed by the improvement of your work.

I've always loved your stories, but this is an entirely different calibre altogether.

You are developing quite a "voice".

Now about the was just beautiful. A sort of strange family piece, John is not there physically, but he is still very much a presence in their lives.

The last line is what sold it for me. The wording there was inspired.

Fell4 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
This is SO CUTE! I love it! Very well writen! I like how you told why she didn't want John to know he had a daughter! Awesome!


PS- Yay! I'm the first reviewer! Ha! I feel awesome! XD