|Reviews for When Dawn Comes|
| karinori chapter 28 . 3/23
I am not sure if you are still active to read this, still I want to say thank you for this piece of awesomeness. I just regret that I found this decades after. This is such a wonderful story! I love this to the bits.
Serena reactions to everything has been so real with all her imperfections. I also loves Darien character here, but a questionWhen did Darien start lovimg Serena? Or, when did he realize that he loves Serena? Did he only loves Serena because he realized she is Sailor Moon? So much of hopeless romantic I am, I would be a little sad if he only have lust and attraction to Serena and only loves Sailor Moon, thus loving Serena upon the realization..
The scouts and Lune has been so wondefull here. So supportive and loving.
I really loves both endings! But I get to choose, 25a have my cookies. I just wished it would explain a bit more on others perpective about Serenity's death. Can't help but I love that kind of thing. But definitely thanking you for writing 2 optional ending for us! I was itching to write one myself, but I know my might alone is not enough. Hahaha
Thank you again for the wonderful story. I wished I read this earlier when you just wrote this so you will know my love and appreciations to your writing! Looking forward for more!
| TropicalRemix chapter 28 . 2/2/2017
you should write a equal to this story.
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/31/2016
I don't really like your Serena... she's kind of bitchy.
| Kasienda chapter 28 . 7/29/2016
I know it's been like over a decade, but just wanted you to know that I think this holds up well! Your Usagi acts and behaves (pulling away from everyone - becoming distant and secretive, etc.) a lot like a victim of drugged rape would. And that is just so human and beautiful. I loved it!
Your Mamoru is a beautiful interpretation of his character.
I did find myself wishing there had been a little more closure once the memories were recovered! A little processing now that she knows what actually happened. Or maybe just a heart to hear confession and make-up with the other senshi as that never got to happen (stupid youma interrupting important moments!).
Though I do love how you capped the forgotten evening at the beginning and end of the story. Very artistically done!
Both of your endings were powerful in their bittersweetness. Nice work. I'm delighted you didn't shy away from the death completely. There can be a lot of power in that loss.
Anyway, hope you're still around to get this as I wanted you to know your work is appreciated even years after the fact!
| pricklingsensation chapter 27 . 5/15/2016
You did such a good job with maintaning the storyline, i could not tear my eyes away! Thank you for such a good read!
| Serenity312 chapter 26 . 10/3/2015
Very interesting story! Unique plot. I like the last epilogue the best :) Thanks for sharing
| JustThatKindOfSpecial chapter 27 . 3/21/2015
This was good but could have been better. Like don't get me wrong everything about it was great, in fact, it could have possibly been incredibly but then what really let you down was your grammar.
First, "where" and "were". Completely different things. "his" and "he's". Also completely different things.
And I know it is common to make a couple of errors when it comes to "there" "their" and "they're" but really? Almost constantly? "Your" and "you're"? REALLY?
This was just a laziness that should have been checked over and edited because it was just so very poor. But I hope you continue to write as it would be a shame to waste such potential.
| Sam chapter 12 . 10/29/2014
My god. PLEASE learn the difference between "there", "their", and "they're". And while you're at it, "your" and "you're" are NOT the same word. I can barely read this.
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/17/2014
She's pregnant. It's so obvious.
| She138 chapter 28 . 8/26/2014
Story was great! Couldn't stop reading, and when I was forced to put it down, I couldn't wait to continue reading. Captured the emotions very well. I wasn't thrilled about the ending/s, but hey, what are you gonna do. I felt the buildup was amazing, and to me, felt a little let down. Awesome job again. This is going in my favorites.
| darkrose923 chapter 27 . 5/15/2014
This story was great! and I liked the 2nd epilogue better than the 1st. But dear god girl. If you ever need an editor, message me. I'd be happy to do it. The spelling in this story was so bad it even confused me at times. The words you misspelled the most often? Off (2 F's not one), quiet (not quite), choked (not chocked). Also it's Memories, not "memorys."
| Amu4ever chapter 11 . 5/3/2014
Hmm...there is something wrong with this picture...something is definitely not right...
| Amu4ever chapter 4 . 5/3/2014
Oh man...what are you doing with our cute little bunny? :(
| Amu4ever chapter 3 . 5/3/2014
Oh my gosh...poor Bunny/Serena
| Amu4ever chapter 2 . 5/3/2014
Oh oh...Darien ...Momoro did this?