|Reviews for The Chaos Nexus|
| Hiryo chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
Please update this wonderful story.
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
This is awesome I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue!
| Ranmaleopard chapter 3 . 12/6/2011
cool i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
| Ranmaleopard chapter 2 . 12/6/2011
this is awesome i cant wait to see what happens next! nor can i wait to see eclipses reaction when ranma falls in his sisters spring and she joins her soul to ranma as well. Please continue!
| Werewolf2300 chapter 3 . 11/9/2011
looks good like what you have done with ranma
| junpie chapter 3 . 11/7/2011
not bad cant wait to see were this goes
| Vld chapter 3 . 9/28/2011
Nice! Now, we know your take on the Neriman characters, but... what about the sEnshis? Or are you waiting till you introduce them to tell us what you think of them?
I agree on your tak about everyone... mostly. I don't completely agree about Kasumi. I mean, she "failed as a mother"? She isn't supposed to be one in the first place. Aside from that... well, aside from being nice to Ranma where most others weren't... she still threw the engagement down on Akane and never tried to talk her youngest sibling out of her barbaric view.
Strangely, the only character i hate is Genma, despite everything, but i don't mind bashing the others either. Yes, even Kasumi.
| Nysk chapter 3 . 9/27/2011
Glad to see another well written and enjoyable update.
Thanks for adding to this story.
| Maximara chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
The other Sailor Senshi abilities and personalities are EASY to find-wikipedia and wiki moon as well as summations give you enough to work with.
Pluto and Saturn are headaches due to their abilities: Pluto has the Time Gates and this claim ideal future is BS to anyone who knows how history actually works (watch James Burke's Connections some time) and Saturn is a freaking human Death Star.
My fanfic Saotome Ranma, Wiseman tries to address the major logic holes in Sailor Moon though I had to use plot devices (like a fake Sailor Pluto in the 30th century) so certain characters didn't come off as either psychotic loons or dumber than Kuno idiots. And even then I had to resort to a Usagi is still a clueless ditz in the 30th century to make the whole Wiseman thing even work.
| Uena chapter 2 . 9/6/2011
Well, other than the fact that you need to clean up the story (a.k.a. proof-read, grammar check, punctuation, etc...) It's good.
Also, it's nice that Ranma wouldn't be too over-powered. May good story-lines are broken just because of this. I like that Ranma knows Amazonian techniques before he meets the Amazon tribe. It could explain (if you decide to go canon) why Ranma is a fast learner of those moves.
Lastly, I loled at the OMAKE.
| Fox Boss chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
Saturn's personality is similar to Hinata's from Naruto. Shy, but very nice.
| Vld chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
Well, i liked this chapter, but i'm mostly gonna comment on your take about the Senshis.
So, in order... Pluto. Well, as much as i like Pluto-bashing (more because it is fun than my "dislike" of her, because well, i actually like her) i never pictured her as a "crazy psycho".
Truth is, as the guardian for the Time Gates, she would be the one to know the best course for a working future. A lot of fanfiction authors see her as "the bitch trying to bring back the silver millenium no matter the cost"... i see her as "the one who's role is to find the best possible future following her ruler's wishes". Since said ruler is Usagi, and knowing how good and loving she is, Setsuna would have to look for the future with the best chances of survival for humanity... in the long term. That she chose Crystal Tokyo, despite the "Great Freeze" or whatever anyone may call the cataclysm that preceded it... means that despite the obvious loss in life, Crystal Tokyo is the one working future. At least the only one she could see.
Now, in your story (and in many stories) the Senshis' powers are Order-based, and no matter how you see it (don't remember if it was mentioned anywhere in either manga or anime) Ranmais Chaos personified... whether he wants it or not. In Star Wars, opposites are blind to each other, the Light side can't really see the Dark side, and what not... here, Chaos and Order being opposites, Ranma and the choices he could bring for the future would be invisible at worst, clouded at best to anyone with any kind of sights (Neptune's mirror, Rei's fire readings, Saturn's dreams, and... Pluto's Time Gates).
Pluto's problem... is that she can't see Ranma's possible futures. It is not that she's trying to bring Crystal Tokyo because she wants it.
The outcast couple... well, i pretty much agree... especially if you didn't go farther than the Grail's appearance. So no big.
You forgot "Death Reborn Evolution" for Saturn's attacks but since you never saw her, that's no problem.
Venus... well, as a Senshi she's the most experienced (save for Pluto) and while not as powerful as the Outers, she had more time to grow into her powers (which brings a lot of questions about why she gets put on the same level as her fellow Inners since Sailormoon R). As a civilian, though, she IS a ditz. Boy-crazy, fashion-crazy, etc... and to top it all off, she can't seem to remember a proverb even if her life depended on it. When untransformed, she's the stereotypical blonde.
Jupiter... well, let's see what you make of her.
Mars... yep, she's a hothead... kinda weird, too, when you think she's supposed to be a miko (meaning a priestess... considering her bad temper, it's hard to believe she can concentrate so well, huh?)
Mercury... well, she rocks. So no questions here.
Moony... well, yeah, she is powerful indeed... and she needs training BADLY, although i'm not sure training her would work... as dedicated as she is to saving others, everytime she trained (one or twice in the anime) it ended up being useless.
Kamen... powerful? Did you read the same manga or watch the same show as i did? Seriously, what good is he for? I mean, okay, so he helps Sailormoon on occasions... when the opponents she's dealing with are weak and she would sooner or later turn the tables and destroy them? But when it REALLY matters, where is he? When she fought Beryl and Metalia, is was the Damsel in distress, not the Fashionly late Hero.
Against Eil and An's super-"bad"-tree? He was useless.
Only thing he did good against the Black Moon Clan... wait, no, he was about to enter an incestuous relationship with his black-magic-tainted daughter.
And i won't mention his following useless moments because you apparently haven't seen it.
Chibi-Usa, weak? Well, she is around 8 or 10 years old, AND her power is actually "first-generation", so to speak. The other SEnshis may have been slightly older when they got their powers, when they get said powers, they also get unconscious knowledge of how to use them due to their past lives. Something the youngster doesn't have.
The cats... can i say useless?
And i think i'll stop here.
| Maximara chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
While interesting there is one major problem here: the Time Gates. Sure you can handwave something to prevent them from seeing Beryl's attack but how do you prevent them from viewing the past?
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
GREAT START! (*x4) Well done on the history.
| chm01 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011