|Reviews for Oh Lola!|
| Brooklyn Marie chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
| Persephone999 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Overall, this was pretty good. The only thing I could change is that I think "Cuz" is a bit off coming from Humbert.
You've got Lo's cynicism bang on, and you contrast her and Humbert brilliantly. I hope you write more for the Lolita fandom- it deserves more good fics!
| anastasis chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Hi, I can't believe there are no reviews yet, and that there are so few stories based on "Lolita" at all. I like your insight into Humbert's mind and the ending, I just wish it was a bit longer. Well done, anyway :)