Reviews for The Black Button
gffhhg chapter 2 . 10/17/2013
carry on writing
Bluestarisawesome chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
That was pretty hardcore. I like to think of sex as a delicate thing, but thats just me. Anyway, it was pretty good
Lary Reeden chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
A crackfic undoubtedly ~ sorry for the criticism, but is very mechanical.
rigers chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
They sooo wouldn't do that. But its a good lemon all the same :)
NeonDomino chapter 2 . 2/28/2012
I read this and would read if you made a story from this :)
hot under the collar chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
Try it out, and see what everyone thinks. Should be good!
kelly990999 chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
When r u gonna post the story?
RunWithJacobBlack chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Whoa girl! That was even better than what I've done in one shots and I've done a fair few scenes! You should maybe make a history of one shots, because I would love to read more! XD

- Sky
kelly990999 chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
MAKE THE STORY!
kelly990999 chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
i want MORE MORE MORE!
sadafies chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
My only advice if that the typical penis is about five to six inches long when erect, so it would be more believable if Jake's penis was about eight inches, which is pretty long but still achievable.
newmoon88 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
A little more story around this one-shot lemon would be good though, for a virgin, its a good effort and honest of you to admit that.
Zapphe chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
It was good effort, realistic enough for someone who hasn't had any experience. May be you can read some of the others to give you more idea.
Zayide chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
woman! that shit was sour sour sour...see this pucker face! *points to self* thats a happy sour face...lmao!
girlygirl156 chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
wow it was really good
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