|Reviews for Tortured|
| audreyHepburn5502 chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Her eyes are hazel
| Child of Dreams chapter 2 . 6/17/2015
(shrieks in outrage)
What the hell, Daniel?
| Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
Um, Luce has hazel eyes, not blue.
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/26/2014
This was FANTASTIC!
| kat.of.the.rina chapter 14 . 10/13/2012
Ur a really good writer!
hope to read another one of ur stories
| V chapter 14 . 9/8/2012
okay just... no. yeah, just no. enough said. -_-
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 14 . 6/27/2012
All I will say is this: This last chapter left a bittersweet feeling in me.
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 13 . 6/27/2012
OH MY GOD OH MY FUCKING GOD! I had to stop reading at the 'Cam froze'. I stopped out of fear, horror, shock, terror, and prayed the the ending I thought was gonna happen didn't happen...But IT HAPPENED!
I might as well be crying since I'm so close to crying. You might as well have killed me! I could just...die! I'm so mad at you!
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 12 . 6/26/2012
Okay, I was like fine reading until 'It tore me apart inside, but I knew who I wanted. Who I needed.' I was like "Oh my god! Please be Cam!" And at teh second 'I took a step forward' I had to look away for a second. And at 'I turned to my right to face...' I stopped reading and looked away, praying for Cam, hoping to see his name. And so, my heart sank when I read '-bright violet eyes-' I almost started cussing and crying for it! I hate you so much right now...
T.T That's me. T.T T.T T.T
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 11 . 6/12/2012
From the point where Cam arrived at Luce's houes I was like 'Oh my god oh my god oh my god' over and over and I but my nail a lot and at the end I was like 'WTH? Why must you end there!'
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 10 . 5/29/2012
I am reading this at school and let me say my heart is broken. Im sittin at a tavle surrounded by classmates so I had to bite my lip to keep from getting teary-eyed. I dont know why bit i wanted to cry and I would scream if i wasnt at school.
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 9 . 5/27/2012
My heart just broke into a billion pieces :'( ...Luce's words hurt ME as much as they hurt CAM! Why Luce? Why! I could cry since she'd going back to Daniel...AND IT MEANS SHE'S LEAVING CAM! *dramatic teardrop!*
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 8 . 5/11/2012
"-You hurt her, and now you lost her.-" I almost squealed when I read that. Buhbye Daniel, your car is right over here Uhold open car door* just hop in and GET AWAY! Oh, and have a nice life WITHOUT Luce!
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 7 . 5/7/2012
Daniel sounds a bit like an adic who hasnt had his drugs in a while...hilarious! Cam was so sweet even when Luce said she'd thought he was Daniel. And Im some how being patient for CamXLuce, yay!
Update as soon as you cam please!
| AgentDoubleONight chapter 6 . 5/5/2012
Such loveliness suring the LuceXCam at the lake. But how could she have ever, for a second, thought it was Daniel? And why on earth did she scream? Update as soon as you get the chance, please!