Reviews for Mandalorian Fox
Macilnar chapter 4 . 9/11/2012
I absolutely love this story! Need. More!
Peter Kim chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
Oppose 's decision to remove fics lemons and extreme violence!
god of all chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon.
EvilTenten chapter 4 . 4/6/2012
Love the story so far, keep it up
Madman584 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Ryu is a fucking Sith lord. He ain't no Jedi. You want to know why? Behold, excerpts from your own story to prove my point.

"Before anyone could do anything, the pink-haired woman's neck snapped in two with a loud crack, and the body fell lifelessly to the ground."

When Darth Fucking Vader shows more restraint and mercy than an alleged Jedi Knight, something's wrong.

"Unfortunately a few Chuunin manage to get over their fear and attempted to attack the spectral Jedi. But unfortunately for them, it was not to be.

The two Chunin made it only two steps before they were cut down by a white armored figure that dropped down from above "You fucked up bastards," The figured growled, it was obviously female with the way the form fitting armor curved although they were not able to see her face due to the helmet she was wearing. "Harming children.""

How dare those poor Chunin do their jobs. Seriously, for all she knew, they might've just been trying to get the asshole who murdered that council member; she murdered people doing their jobs.

"Haven't you ever wondered why mine is a different color than regular Lightning, it's because of the intent behind it, mine is meant to protect."

Which is why you took great sickening pleasure in frying the fuck out of that one ANBU guy. Here's the quote to prove it.

"The Shinobi jerked his head behind him, and the last thing he saw was Ryu's smiling before he launched lightning at the ANBU, causing the Rogue shinobi to scream in agony as the Force lightning cooked his insides. After two minutes, all that was left of the ANBU was a blackened corpse. Ryu glared at the corpse, knowing the fool deserved it."

Face it; Ryu is a fucking villain. Even when you stack the odds for him, the council is still more in the right than him. This shouldn't happen.

I'd actually seriously talk about the fic, but the problem is your fic blends with the shit you or your friends previously wrote anyway, so what's the point?
ABard chapter 4 . 1/3/2012
The Firespray class ship had only 7 prototypes built, from what i can remeber, and all but one were destroyed when Jango Fett took the last one during a staged prison break, i know more were made but the modifications you described were exactly like the ones on the Slave-1 i'm not trying to flame the story(it is actually preety good) i just would like some clarification on how they got such a ship.
Mordalfus Grea chapter 4 . 11/16/2011
I almost feal sorry for Ol'Palpy. Key word Almost
Deadzepplin chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
This looks like a good story but not my style
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 4 . 10/30/2011
Love it! :)
117Jorn chapter 4 . 10/29/2011
Next chapter...the ultimate showdown begins...
DragonKnightRyu chapter 4 . 10/29/2011
Pirates vs. Ninjas, COME AT ME BRO! (None Piece joke)
Jack Cypher Vex chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Awsome.
YubelHaouJudai chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
Man I really crying in this meet Naru-chan with her parents is really touch, good work!
Guardian 777 chapter 3 . 10/7/2011
Great story. really worth the read
Guardian 777 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I like where this story is headed. Keep it up bro!
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