|Reviews for actions|
| jake chapter 1 . 2/8
I like the poem keep up the good work
| truthsetfree chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
I loved this. It reads like a poem. Good strong images. Good incorporation of the senses. Very dramatic.
| Oddments and Tweaks chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
You know what? I loved this! It doesn't matter about the punctuation in this case-I think it adds to the urgent feel of the piece. I love how you reference the chapters in a single line (loved the monarch bit!) In short, thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanks for posting!