Reviews for Unbeknown Mutual Feelings
CharmanderGirl13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
I had to reread that one paragraph a few times. Not even the paragraph just the sentence. at first I didn't notice it said 'george' but my brain kept shouting something seemed off so i... Yeah anyways this was good. Its well written which is a good thing. And a halfassed compliment to you. Oh and you are a fantastic author. :) there's a good compliment.
harrypotter156 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
THIS IS SO LAME!
Vickie C chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
"Harry's heart rate increased as George began to rub his penis against his own."

Wait a moment.. George? O_O
May-The-Wolf-Girl chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
this is a really good story, but at one point you mixed up the names.

you wrote this:

Harry's heart rate increased as George began to rub his penis against his own.

you wrote george instead of fred. i thought you would want to know.
HAIDURR chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
OMG THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING YEAH BABY!
Exxal chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Pretty good! I don't normally ship Harry and Fred (never even thought about it, really) but it was surprisingly cute! Good job! :]