Reviews for Seven Ravens
britanon chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
You might want to get a britpick beta instead of using a website. Living in England and Scotland my whole life, I've never heard anyone use 'titch' for idiot, or the word 'daffery'. Titch usually means someone small or young. Also, in the first chapter when they were driving and you said they could go more than one hundred, that doesn't make sense in the UK. We use mph, so the fastest we can legally drive is 70mph, and that's only on the motorway. Little things like that can be solved by getting a beta.
yoong chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
Thanks for the translation. Aside from my native language, I only know English, so your effort is greatly appreciated! ]
queen of the moment chapter 2 . 8/16/2011
I was just wondering if this story is based off of the Grimm's fairy tale the Seven Ravens? I can't really tell yet, but the title makes me think it might?