|Reviews for Drink, Drank, Drunk|
| megansalvatoreox chapter 1 . 2/21
Aww i love it, so sweet
| ashray4 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
| meeee chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
its really good. keep writing
| GottaLoveMEgan chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Thanks for writing this! I really wanted to see this scene from Tobias's POV.
| wuzntme chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
I loved that part in the book it was such a sweet moment. I also love how you altered it to be in Tobias's, or shall we say, Four's point of veiw. A brilliant one-shot
| IWishIWasAWeasley chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
This was really good! Most people don't know how to write Fours POV, and it's not easy. But you're the best I've come across! Cheers!
| flightlessraven chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
oh my god. four. you got his character so perfectly. absolutely amazing, man. c:
| mikimousey chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Very nice! Thanks for writing about four :)
| Sophie-May chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Love it! I can picture that as his thought process! Awesome!
| mercury chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
| By chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Luv I I always google when the word… sexy is in the text
| SoMuchForSobriety chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
"So do you," she says. Her eyes squint and her lip curls a bit, like she's trying to hide a smile. "What are you doing?"
I don't hesitate with my response.
Flirting with you.
OH MY GOD.
| Bookyworm15 chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Wow! Honestly, this wasn't a part that stuck out to me, though I now wonder why it didn't - it's not every day you see Four drunk!
I think this was VERY good! If you hadn't mentioned it at the end, I never would have known this wasn't betaed, or at least looked over by someone else. I am definitely going to read your other fics, and I hope for something as awesome as this!
Some constructive critisism: the only thing I would've done differently was that I wouldn't have so many short sentences right after each other. It sounds unnatural to me. Although, this is only what I think - I'm sure many people would LOVE anything you write, even if it has short sentences.
| FieryShadows13 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
That was really, really good! You really caught Fours POV! GREAT JOB!