Reviews for Smoke and Mirrors
IServe4LIfe chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
Not going to lie, this piece had me laughing at one minute then 'omg I can't put my phone down I'm really into this piece' feeling the next. It was all so good. I like how you alluded to possible smut but then backed away. It made this piece so much more suspenseful. Honestly you could continue this piece (or even write a sequel) because there's more many questions that can arise. But I LOVED it. Continue writing!
rach13975 chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Oooh love this I really wish you would continue it
El chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
I LOVED this. It's good that it wasn't explicit, because in my opinion that makes it ten times hotter since it leaves so much to the imagination. This was crazily hot and full of yummy tension. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I'd like to ask your permission to translate this text. Thank you!
romiross chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Interesting piece! I've been craving a story of this scene with a little more passion. And I agree, his actor is heart pounding to look at and listen to. Thankyou for writing this!

By the way, don't sell yourself short! I have a feeling you'd be able to write a pretty decent and delectable smut scene if you ever felt inclined...
writingblondie chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Wow you did a really good job on this! I absolutely love it! Great job!
Commander Of Brontdor chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
You have given Jane's true character so much justice and truth! In so many stories she is some helpless weakling who LIKES how dominating and possessive Rochester can be of her - particularly in sex,

but she is portrayed as the Jane we all initially fell in love with and admired fervently - as a principled, assertive woman who explores herself with caution and self-awareness

LOVED THISSSS! xD
Denaliyasha chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
This is excellent! You have the language down, and the characters read true to both the book and the movie.

Also, this:

It revealed that he had surprisingly baroque tastes in upholstery.

I laughed for a solid minute. That is a fantastic line.

Thank you so much!

Denni
LadyForrest chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
That was HOT! and true to Bronte. Loved it!
MajoringinFandoms chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Go Jane and her morals. Even if the rest of us aren't exactly "jubilant" at the turn of events, she really is some one to look up to. Got to love Jane Erye.
DeathByMonkees chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
very lovely :) and omg, imagining fassbender doing all this - heaven! he's so hot haha

anyway, very well written, you really had me hooked the whole time. and the characters felt very true to themselves too, especially jane. good job! :)
Di12381 chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Beautiful, I got shivers from the story. Very good job.
Bonbonnett chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
That was the hot stuff-yesirree! Very good piece-viking warrior/barbarian/caveman approach to the delicate matter of lust or love-(Take your pick, you can't have both!) and our hero and heroine stumble and bumble onwards toward truelove-gawdhelpus! More? 8-O
mrs.justenbeeebir123 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
omg its ssooooo goooodd!