Reviews for Disappearance
Eternal Abyss 59 chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
I'm usually an originalshipping kind of gal but this story is certainly and absolutely an exception :') This was really sad ;( Yellow died and Red was waiting ;(
Himawari Mii chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
christi1212 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
poor yellow ..she disrupter..and red is left alone broken hatred TT I cryed
Tsuna 4 Cn4s chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
This was so... so... SAD!

But excellent job! :')
lidijanette chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
That was depressing. *knock on door* GO AWAY CRAZY OLD BAT OF A LAND LADY! I'm serious, my mom's land lady hugs me T_T Oh well... Bye bye
NoProb101 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
So sad. So very sad.
silvermoonstone23 chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Fine, I'll admit it; I cried!
I read this story a few months ago and got so confused, but reading this again, now I totally understand it. The game changed all the characters, and Yellow and Crystal (and Wally and Emerald I think, but no one seems to care about them except me) kind of are ignored. It's just like how Misty and May left the anime, and aren't comig back. Sort of like that, only sadder. I don't know where Yellow and Crys went, but it must have to do with some evil people who are trying to control the games and anime and manga and have it bend to their will so they replace the old characters! Just kidding, that's weird. Someone should write a story about that.
Honestly this is so sad! I miss Crys and Yellow! I seriousl spent a week on my Soul Silver game trying to find her in the Viridian Forest before I realized she wasn't there O.o
Awesome job on this, the creators of Pokemon are so cruel for changing them (even though I like Soul, I like Crys better and wish the could just coexist)
H chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Awwwww it's so cute but sad
True M. Vega chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
If I ever battle him again, I will remember the true reason he rests at Shirogane's Mount...thank you for showing me.
xXSnowHimeHikariXx chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
I think I'm crying...
xXSnowHimeHikariXx chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
I think I'm crying...
Crows-Love-Henry chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
That made me 's a really good story.

It's somehow familiar, cause I Role Play as yellow on Facebook and I RolePlayed once with Red San the RolePlay is similar to your story but there's a difference...Red San didn't ask my just called me little girl.
5th Dimension chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
That was beautiful.
HyperCatt chapter 1 . 11/14/2011

That was so beautiful, and pretty...

It made me cry, and now I have to forever wonder what happened to Yellow so that everyone forgot her...

Gone 0 chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
OMG this is such a good story!The first time I read it I cried(in a good way).hope you make more like this.
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