Reviews for The Ring of Troy
Guest chapter 10 . 6/25
I love your story, it's really good. The characters the plot, it's great..! Don't worry about grammar, I know it can be a pain once in awhile, I've dealt with it in my own writings.
Keep at it, as it will come to you the longer you work at it. Reading, also helps in getting the imagination going once in awhile.


Unique chic chapter 10 . 1/22
She should marry Hector straight away and just the two of them could sail to Sparta for their honeymoon. They make good wine in Sparta. Lol.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/23/2016
Love the story, it's creative and quite inventive. I would love to see the story updated, from
chapter 9 and see what happens during Nightmares and Peace Talks.
Though I think Rachel, should stay in Troy during the next chapter.


D.J. Scales chapter 10 . 12/25/2015
I think Rachael should go to Sparta.
D.J. Scales chapter 3 . 12/25/2015
Great job but why must Casandra be so cold to Rachel.
Kyra Night chapter 10 . 11/13/2014
Go to SPARTA! Yeah I juste realy like that story!
Thank you thank you!...
Kyra Night chapter 8 . 11/13/2014
Wel now there is a chance between Hector and Reachel. Actualy i prefer that!
Thank you for such an amazing story! I like it!
Please continu

Ps: sorry for my writing mistakes, you known french persons and english... "
Guest chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
Sesshysgirl 12321,

I really like your story, it's quite creative. For a time travel piece, i think it's really good, I really like the charaters and how you bring the romance between them.
I really think, you should continue writing this one.
I write creatively myself where I like writing romance in addition to sci fi, though I always find a way, to bring some romance into the story.
Keep up your writing because I think you have what it takes to become a writer.

Guest chapter 10 . 5/7/2014
guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
god I've been waiting so long for you to update! plz update! don't give up on this story! plz!
Lili0TheGreen chapter 10 . 1/6/2014
Awwww...please post another splendid chapter!
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 10 . 12/7/2013
You know...I wonder what would happen if Paris were to fall in love with alex instead of Helena.

Better yet...what would happen if Achiles were to fall in love with one of the sisters then join Troy. After all family sticks together...right.

There must be a way to haves the so called cake and eat it too...

As long as Agememnon loses and the hero's survive all's well.
Shanthi.lily chapter 10 . 11/26/2013
Great story! Cannot wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/16/2013
Rachel should stay in Troy.

Guest chapter 9 . 11/3/2013
more please I was speechless when that princess died and more Sydney please also axel also can you make it so in the end troy is still standing and that girl who can see the future is saying and so I have lived in the time of hector tamer of horses and Achilles . there foretold by a girl thought to be mad of a girl with a great destiny that came with three others to soothe the great and bonded those to stop the war of the Greeks and troy for ever changing its fate.
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