|Reviews for The Rising Swell|
| crackupmonkey chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Alice is so thoughtful ;)
| jennayg123 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I absolutely loved this story! Hope you decide to add more at some point!
| Phae chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Damn, girl... You mean you didn't win? *fans face*
| Halo221 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Left a review on the contest entry page as well, but I enjoyed this story and would love to see it continued or expanded!
| perduto amore chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
| NPakus chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
What a sweet little peek into this group! Thank you for sharing.
| easypeasy chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
you should make this into a full story if you have time it would be so amazing
| Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Very sweet and well-written! We've all been there! :)
| Iklepixie chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
yummy beach dweller. Loving the fluff
| IndianWalker chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
| nurseroxy chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
I'm so happy I found this as it is amazing. You managed to capture so much raw emotion, It brought back memories. I can remember as a teen feeling that my friends and I were going separate ways and feeling left out and a little jealous. I also remember feeling more than a little inexperienced during my first make out sessions and it going a little further than it should have. Hormones are a crazy thing as a teenager, and you captured it all beautifully. Thanks for sharing.
| Britt01 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Wow...I remember that feeling so well - friends racing ahead in experiences that took me a much longer time to experience, and feeling somewhat bewildered and left behind and lonely. And remembering how my first kiss (in university, no less) left me topless as well! Nothing else went nearly as fast as with Bella, but I vividly remember how it felt to get swept up in the feelings of that kiss, at last, and also having finally caught up with my friends. You captured that really well.
| folm chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
THat was lovely & sweet & sexy all rolled into one! Thanks!
| majose chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
such a great description of what it feels like to be 16. It makes me want to chain my daughter till she turns 20 or 30 ;)
| JustMaeBe chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
I actually feel for Bella in this. I know what it's like to have friends that go away together and come back...different. She is lucky though because Alice was still thinking of her. I never got an Edward. I didn't even get a call once they got back. We never really recovered and even now, a year later, I am still out of step every day and the gap is just getting wider. Truth is, I don't thing they will even remember me much this time next year.
But all in all, Im happy her story turns out better than mine.