|Reviews for Masen Days|
| whohellanoes chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
these two are great. love their connection, albeit their verbal communication is very minimal. just says a lot more. anyhoot, thanks for the update.
| Fliberty chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
This is sweet. Bella's patience seems to be paying off.
| Shahula chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
I love the truck bed scene. I get such a good visual image of them lying together, his head on her stomach and fingers in his hair. It's sweet and lovely and a great step forward for them.
| kellyprovence chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
I will usually die for an all powerful and macho Edward. Even if hes an ass. But this tortured, sad Edward has my insides all sad and I want to hug him.
Cant wait for more!
| ss77 chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
Things I love: "peet-zah" and stomach/bladder chats. :)
I think lounging in the truck and playing with hair is all sorts of innocent an intimate. It is a really sweet moment. Slowly getting comfortable with each other.
Stawberry lips gloss vs. pina colada? I vote Strawberry. ;)
| MeBHop chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
I really want to know what Masen writes in his notebook! Something about Bella, maybe..? :p
Looks like he trouble at home or something, and I love how Bella's progressing! Looking forward to reading more!
| shaz308 chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
I found this thanks for the fictionators blog. Looks interesting. Thanks.
| Ri0t chapter 2 . 8/28/2011
LOVING this story! Mason is so quiet and mysterious and it's insanely CUTEEE! Can't wait to read more :)
| MillieD chapter 2 . 8/28/2011
looking forward to seeing what he writes in his notebook. Does he feel the same and stuff like that.
I had to laugh at Bella for not caring if she was being obvious by the time that English class happened.
Cant wait for more.
| MillieD chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
How cute! :)
Looking forward to reading more.
| blueeyes11354 chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
The mystery of Masen continues. I see you're posting a companion piece but I tend to prefer one POV. Love reading the mystery of a character unfold. I look forward to more. :)
| blueeyes11354 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I'm glad you decided to continue. And even more so that you let me know in a PM. Woulda had no idea otherwise.
I see we have to backtrack a little; you're not starting where your one-shot left off. But that's cool, my memory for stories sucks. :)
| arreyn emme chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
how adorable! i love a quiet edward..or quiet masen. :) keep up the good work.
| NatashaK89 chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
Great job. This is really good
| Erikajo chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
There is a skate park near where I live. It used to be a community pool. It was old and decrepit so the city closed it and used the hole to make a skate park.
This is a very cool story! :)