Ooo, I love Masen. So sweet!

Oh, sweet Masen...the way he panicked and bolted when Bella's dad came home just broke my heart. At least Bella seems to make him a little bit happy...

LOVE this story so much!

Katy

Oh, sweet Masen. So worried that all fathers are like his.

Or maybe Chief Swan knows a little about his situation.

Jeez, I just want to take care of him.

Bella see him, though. Sees his sadness.

She'll be his source of light, his way through the dark tunnel.

I can't wait to read his thoughts. Always.

Thank you for another wonderful chapter.

I just found this story, and I think you are doing an amazing job. I have a feeling that Edward is getting abused at home with the bruise that Bella saw on his arm and how he reacted when Bella's dad came home. I'm really liking the friendship that's growing between them. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.

I never had PB&J on toasted bread before. Well for that matter I never even heard of honey oat bread but that sounds good. I will have to see if my story carries that. Now your making me hungry! Fabulous chapter. Thank you.

Loving this story as much as I love peanut butter toast and jam! Delicious! :)

Dear author, MD is absolutely superb. I found you through BOYS ON BOARDS contest & that story gave me unexplainable heartache for all left day. But I avid angst reader so it's always my first choice of reading. I like absolutely everything about story so I'm happy to leave review.

This email alert made me understood that these updates are really expanding storyline. So maybe I have to read chaptes 1-3 to have more details of your creation.

Thank you, dear author. Take care and have a good writing.

Masen is as cute as ever :) also love Charlie and Bella, and how they can easily joke around with each other like that. I know that if I told my dad that when I was 17, he'd probably disown me.

Thanks for the update!

I love that he always wants food. It's so sweet that she wants to feed him.

And PB&J on toast is so very good.

This story makes me smile and I love the time that E&B spend together.

And funny Charlie is always a plus in my book.

Thanks for sharing.

I am loving Masen more and more with each chapter and each notebook entry. Still bracing myself for what's going on with him. Bella and Charlie are hilarious. He's a cool dad. I'm glad that you are liking your experience in Edward's world. It's a great place to be. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us.

Mmmm toasted pb&j, it's even better when you use nutella.

So this was totally new, I don't think any of this was in the o/s, and I'm glad you wrote it because in the o/s Edward didn't really seem that scared of Charlie, hanging out on his porch and refusing to leave and stuff, I was like "Isn't it a staple for all boys to be scared of their girlfriend/fiance/fuckbuddy/crush 's fathers?" but I digress..

You know if my Dad came home to a skateboard on the porch, the first thing he woulda said to me was, "Hiding boys in your closet again?", then he would've told my mom and she would've said "Did I miss a wild party?" My parents are aliens.

i like having a look inside bella's world & how charlie is with her. in the o/s it seemed worse than this, or was she just exaggerating?

too sweet, he made her a sandwich :)

I can't believe how addicted to this story I am. I wish you could/would update several times a week! Keep up the great job!

Love the extra time spent together. In VERY curious about Masen's home life. Who was chasing him?