I wanna know Masens secrets so bad but love that there's a mysteriousness about him. I wonder what the drawings on his broad represent? And how did he get that bruise on his forearm?

Anyways i'm loving this more and more! Thanx!

Great update!

He's so cool and mysterious no wonder B is so enamored with him. I think I already love him too. I can't wait to read more of this story!

Great chapter. Is Edward an abused kid?

Loved the chapter.

Love Bella's fascination with Masen.

Because I'm fascinated with him also.

And he seems a little fascinated with Bella as well.

Don't like the idea that there might be some abuse in his life, though.

Thank you, purelyamuse.

So sweet. Loved your o/s and look forward to the expanded story. Ah Snobsdale so fake so true.

I love Angela. She is so quirky, random and honest. I especially love her lack of filter. Very entertaining.

I have totally been in stalker Bella's shoes before. Isn't that what we all did in HS? Spy from afar. But, if a boy is going to see you home everyday, odds are in your favor.

So, I've got to know what Edward's POV was when Bella was asking about his board doodles. She said it said a lot about him. I love that he smiled and responded w/ "boy" when Bella broke down what she saw, but I can't help but wonder if quiet Edward was making light of what he was feeling. Did he?

Ha. I knew about that crush 500 words before she did! :oD

I wonder how long she will have to stalk him to get a reaction out of him... he IS a teenage boy, after all, and we all remember they are stupid!

he is quite a little mystery huh? great chapter!

love ur writing, Quiet Edward is my favorite:-) XXM

Intrigued by the story so far. Jada rec'd it on Twitter. I'm waiting for Bella to be caught admiring him. Can't wait to see what happens next.

She's totally his stalker but can you blame her..nope. haha. I wonder what he thinks about Bella. You should do an EPOV.

ahh Jada the Roughie Queen is the reason I found this story. :) I kinda like that B is the stalker for a change! LOL

PS: Take my comment as a compliment - I tend not to agree to beta multi-chapter anything unless it's an easy edit job that doesn't require hard work to whip into shape. I'm inherently lazy. ;-p

You know I wish they had placement voting in the boys on boards contest because I definately would have voted your entry as number one. So you can imagine how excited I am that your expanding it, and maybe one day someone can talk you in to a continuation *cough cough*. Anyway, the thing I love most about this is how much you can squeeze out of a tiny amount of words, I find Masen and Bella's one word responses more satisfying then some of the long ass monolgues I've read in other stories.