|Reviews for Masen Days|
| arlzs chapter 18 . 11/1/2013
I just...I'm...but she...wow. What even just happened?
I was all talked in, accepting my assumed reality (see prior review: smart, I get it, mature...blah, blah, blah) and then BAM! 180 Bella. Jesus, I am so glad, because - gah - he was so cute and happy, but I did not expect that. At. All. I was ready to start begging for some sort of futuretake where everything was rainbows and butterflies. *crisis averted*
His poem. The (I paraphrase, probably badly...apologies in advance) 'rip my chest open to show you my heart is your home'. Holy wow. That was just such a picture and whew...feelings.
So, thanks! I see there's another chapter here that isn't on my kindle copy. I'm gonna go see what it is!
| arlzs chapter 17 . 11/1/2013
I can't even read the extra for this chapter yet, because I don't know if I can take it right this second. :(
'I just...I never get what I want.' - I gave a little 'oh.' and there were tears. Second time that's ever happened...I am so incredibly sad for him.
I get Bella. I totally do. She makes perfect sense. It's smart of her. Mature. I just can't get past wanting all the good things for Masen. So, can't be mad at her, but...damn. That situation BLOWS.
| arlzs chapter 16 . 11/1/2013
Oh, boy. You're continuing to kill me. Reaaally worried about the ending here, ngl!
Them in the car with Angela. Awww...some of the most fun moments in this story. Love so much that she stole his poetry. *hearts*
I hate that ff won't let us copy/paste any more because there are so many moments here I would call out.
That talk they had after their shower. That's exactly why this story is full of feelings. Such a revelation that she made him want to leave, but now he doesn't want to leave her. :(
I feel like she's not gonna go.
| arlzs chapter 15 . 10/31/2013
Forgot, forgot last time...Parachute and SafetySuit. Love them both!
Here. Bella. I find myself frustrated with her asking him to stay. I feel like I shouldn't be, that you don't mean for me to be, but I am.
I hope she takes Renee's inadvertent advice to heart.
He deserves to be so happy. Away from there and happy.
| arlzs chapter 14 . 10/31/2013
My heart. :(
I'm so glad that he suggested she come with him.
I'm so sad that their first time was tainted by the ugliness from his home. I was on pins and needles reading that and it was heartbreaking.
I wonder how much Charlie suspects, both about Masen and about Bella possibly leaving. His statement can certainly be taken a couple ways.
| arlzs chapter 13 . 10/30/2013
They are so sweet and lovely together.
I know she wants him to stay, but I don't see how he could. :( It's sad to see them so resigned to an expiration date. They need option C!
| arlzs chapter 12 . 10/29/2013
Argh...it's bugging me. If everyone knows, why hasn't someone done something to help this poor boy?
His poetry here scared me a little.
How will they possibly separate? She's fooling herself, I think. They'll be so sad without each other.
Sleep calls. More tomorrow!
| arlzs chapter 11 . 10/29/2013
They're so sweet and carefree here, but it's hard to forget his reality. :(
| arlzs chapter 10 . 10/29/2013
Good God that letter taped to the door. 'Whatever you need...'
And before that, prompting that note, how he was so affected by her crying.
I feel like I need to thank you for the lighthearted 'hey, it's the porch guy' moment, too. A good chuckle in the midst of the heavy. I totally got Bella's frustration at the ill-timed shrug, too. Sorta takes the tender out of the would-be-sweet moment.
This chapter was fantastic. Loved that he shared so much. He has a very hard life. I want to hug him so hard.
| arlzs chapter 9 . 10/29/2013
Going back a few...
This just kills me how he's 'porch guy' and giving her back her shoes (I'm dying to know more of what they say, but the peek you gave ((repentant, drowning in my shame...healing my soul...my heart!)) was so rip-you-through-the-chesty that more would've brought the tears, I think.
The idea that he's there each morning, just waiting for her to give him something -anything- it's so much.
| morena.davidson.3 chapter 19 . 10/26/2013
Love this so much..words are not enough...yeah...thanks for sharing :)
| Jasline Devereaux chapter 18 . 10/17/2013
Great story. I loved your characters and the fact that you knew exactly WHO they needed to be for this story to work. It was fun, sad(I cried countless times), witty, romantic, etc.
I've been missing out on big sleep this past 24 hours reading this story. (I had to work in between the time and I'm barely standing/sitting now)
I'm glad Bella and Masen grew into such lovable characters, from not knowing who they could be to taking chances and trusting in blind faith. Trusting in love never hurt, either...not that much.
I'm glad to have had this experience on this site tonight. Its been well over a year since I've read any Twi-fic. You've reminded of me of how beautiful it can be.
Thanks for sharing your story.
Oh yeah, you're a good writer, too!
| PuppetStrings19 chapter 19 . 9/30/2013
I was freaking sobbing. It was so good. Such a great story. Thank you! Lol
God... Seriously, this was amazing. Wow.
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 19 . 9/27/2013
Very interesting. Way too much work to be a teenager. Most of the time just wanted to smack Bella upside the head with an iron pipe. Realized she's a teenager and doesn't know different. She had no real example to follow and Edward had one of the worst examples you can have. That they were able to figure out what to do and where they wanted to be is amazing. Someday it would be interesting to know if they made it.
| PuppetStrings19 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Oh... so good. I love a skaterboy Edward and I'm so happy I've stumbled upon this because I've never came across a fic where someone can write about skating so well. You have an awesome team!
I'm intrigued and I'm moving on to chapter 2.
I'm gonna rec this fic on mine, if thats ok with you. If it isn't let me know. I'm planning on updating my fic by wednesday.
Till next time.