Reviews for Naughty
Cg chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
This is one of my favourite fics ever, I keep on coming back to it and re-reading it! Soooo good!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Nell Fratelli chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I don't care that this is a year old - this is amazing to my hormone-addled and insomniac brain. I love these two - LOVE. Cannot put enough emphasis on the love. They need more air time. MUCH MORE. And possibly their own adult series.

But I digress. Kudos, even if it is 365 days late. - Nell Fratelli
Cskjjmdrn chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Very nice. Is this a one-shot or are you going to do a follow up?
DreamaDove93 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I read this yesterday on my phone but since that thing doesn't let me review I'll do it now 3

LOVE IT! SO MUCH! hahaha, I just love how in character they are, it was wonderfully written and plausible!

continue, yes? It would totally make me happy :)

thecivilunrest chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Annica, Annica, Annica. THANK YOU SO MUCH! This is /fantastic/. Seriously. I love it! It's great! Just, like, I can't even tell you how much I like it. But I'm going to try anyway.

So, your first person. It flows so smoothly, it's amazing. It's just really easy reading and it just washes over you like water (If that even makes any sense because that sounds kind of weird but whatever, it makes sense to me. Kind of.) because it's just so good. And I think that you captured Roy's voice /perfectly/. Seriously, it was almost like I could hear his voice in my head. Ugh, your first person is SO GOOD.

And Jade! Lord, she was really good too. Like how she was tensed and ready to strike, even though she just gone done getting a piece of one of the sexiest asses in cartoon history. XD

This piece was so hot too! (Even though you broke my heart by telling me it wasn't all out prom porn, lol.) Goodness, these two just ooze sex all by themselves, don't they? It's great. And I loved the little details too, like Jade's sharp chin on his chest-that was genius and it really helped me imagine their position, lmao.

And I seriously thought that Jade was going to kill Roy, no lie. I was getting kind of worried for a second, but then I remembered that it's your ship AND it's in first person, so I felt a little bit better. But still.

Also, this made me laugh:

/This is not how I imagined my investigation to turn out. I blame Ollie. No doubt it's his after-mission shenanigans with Dinah that influenced me into this position, though I can't blame him for sleeping with the enemy, out of all people. That's all on me./

Lol, you go Roy. And Ollie and Dinah I guess.

This was /amazing/! Lovely job, seriously, I loooooved it. Thanks so much, again!

fuzzy pencil chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Star of Airdrie chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Absolutely fantastic! Great job with first person and getting in Roy's head - very in character.

Great canon piece!
KrC chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Loved it! Very well written and in character, is this it or are you possibly going to expand it? I'm happy either way but a sequel would be awesome :)

Concolor44 chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
What a gorgeous and accurately canonical piece! You have such a command of the language, and such a marvelous facility for getting into the heads of your characters! Well, Red Arrow's head, at least. Love it!