Reviews for Post Homecoming Book Tags & Missing Moments
puffally chapter 2 . 6/10/2012
R u gonna add more soon
midnightjen chapter 2 . 10/1/2011
Mere words cannot express how much i loved these two fics. The relationship between Torren and John is one of my absolute favourite parts of the Legacy series and i am totally itching for the confrontation between John and Kanaan. It was beautifully written and true to all of the characters involved.

Can't wait for more!
Astrollama chapter 2 . 9/28/2011
Just as good as the last chapter! That had to be an awkward scene in the gateroom, you handled it so well. Now off to read your other stories...
Astrollama chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
This was just beautiful. So totally accurate in how they would go from friends to lifemates.

Favourite line: "Her child was confident in his belief that John Sheppard could banish all his nightmares."

On to the next chapter...
Kiwi7 chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
I hope there is more to come in this story. I haven't purchased the books, and from just the two chapters you have given us. It seems I need to get these books and get them quick. You stayed true to both John and Teyla (something that is hard to do with a lot of authors especially with Teyla). I hope this isn't the end, and you do write more. Keep up the good work!
jtjaforever chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
Again another wonderful tag for this awesome book! Loved when Kannan called John - brother.

Well done!

Update soon.
jtjaforever chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Love this tag to Homecoming. Really like this quiet moment between these two.
sagey chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
loved taht too..adn can undersand them all feeling what they feel...

enjoyed K coming to his realizations..

and I do think he would feel like this...

love torren loving john..

and john jealous is always a plus...

great little stories..keep them coming

hugs
sagey chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
just beautiful..really enjoyed taht..and can see it all happening..and very true to who john and teyla are..

off to read more

hugs
CrankyLex chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
I've actually been thinking about what would happen when Kanaan realizes how close John is to Torren. I'm also glad to see him being portrayed as a reasonable human being rather than The Reason Why J&T Aren't Together. I really enjoyed this one as well.
CrankyLex chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
This really feels like an extension of the book, amazing job! Can't wait to read more.
JoeyLuv chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
OMG! These two actually have a civil conversation without any drama or harsh words. Wow! It would be great if something like shows up in the next book. Thanks to you, I may have to rethink my feelings about Kanaan.
JoeyLuv chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
This was wonderful. I thought I was just me that picked up on the fact that Teyla always called for John. Not only when she needed him, but when she was unsure of where or how he was. Having John ask about the timing of Torren's conception without really asking was downright perfectly Sheppard! I must say, as much as I've loved the first two Legacy books, I really enjoy your take on this and hope you write more after the next book is out.
Kariesue chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
This is absolutely beautiful. Love that you picked up on how Teyla always calls out for John in any dangerous situation regardless of who comes for her. I noticed that, too. It's very telling.

And anytime John and Torren are together is a good thing. Love John being Daddy, I always imagined he would be so good at it, such a child himself at heart. Thanks for sharing!