Reviews for Balance
fireball900 chapter 1 . 4/16
A very well thought out character piece. It hadn't occurred to me to consider who would have been Avatar if Aang had died with the rest of his nation, but I find your... 'argument' for Zuko to be very persuasive.
Now if only I could find a lengthy (complete) fanfic that used that concept...
BrokenChosenofEva chapter 1 . 3/23
Wonderfully done. It really does explain a lot about Zuko, and I agree completely with Sokka's assessment of him and how he should have been Avatar.
BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 3/16
This is a really interesting character study.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
Very pro-Zuko. Interesting way to pull the characters around. Sokka's perspective is well rounded, with a gradual enough change.
Little-miss-laughs-alot chapter 1 . 1/7
"...and that was how Sokka ended up cementing his theory that had Aang not made it and the Avatar cycled through to Fire by this time, then Zuko would've been it."

I'm absolutely in love with this story. It's so well written and introspective (i don't know if it would be called introspective, if it's about Zuko, but...) So thoughtful and thought-provoking!

Thanks so much for writing!
stars4redvines chapter 1 . 1/6
I love this story and how you approached writing Zuko from Sokka's point of view. It is so well written with Sokka describing Zuko's actions and experiences so perfectly and wonderfully... I'm sorry but I don't think I have the words to give this story justice. I truly love this story and enjoyed reading it.
art-is-a-bang-yeah chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
intriguingly wicked idea, love it!
tryal-leaf chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
I definitely agree with you here. If anybody would be a great Avatar, it would be Zuko. He has the experience and the capacity for empathy that not many others do. He's able to look beyond his feelings and sacrifice his ambitions for the good of the people. If he had been raised as an Avatar, I imagine he would take to it like a duck to water.

I really enjoyed reading your insight into Zuko's character! It made me look at him I a very interesting light.

tryal-leaf
Daniella Violet Moon chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
That was a really fascinating character analysis. I'd never even considered this but it's perfect. Aang really is heavily dependant on his Air Nomad heritage and less on balance. In the scheme of things it kind of makes sense. An entire nation vanished from the world, so to balance out that absence the Avatar had to embody a nation instead of balance as a whole.
Thank you for a very interesting and thought-provoking read.
DVM
Twillightfairy chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
I love how you wrote Sokka here. His viewpoint on who is balance and who is noticed makes far too much sense to me. Poor Zuko, though if anyone can show others balance it is him, stubborn, spirit touched Zuko.
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Aw! XD This was so cute and fluffy. Sokka's such an awesome friend and a really deep thinker when he wants to be. I loved this!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Wow amazing character study!
xxxMishaxxx chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
Beautiful, brilliant little character study of Zuko, and indirectly, Sokka too :)
Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
You just blew my mind. My poor brains XP
Peace Like a River chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
Amazing perspective on Zuko. This was a very well-thought out and enjoyable read - thank you for posting!
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