|Reviews for An Unexpected End|
| tringelingetje chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
Really like it. :)
| Bookman87 chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
"Harry had painstakingly recounted every detail of the ordeal, including the contents of Professor Snape's memories. They had all been terribly wrong about him. As spiteful as the greasy git from the dungeons was, Hermione was certain they would not have succeeded without Snape and his nearly 20 years of constant risk. It was quite a hallowing thought."
Other than that little nitpicking, excellent chapter. I love that Hermione and Ron aren't in a sappy suck-face moment here. Seems that there's a non-canonical schism there. I'll be interested to see where that goes.
| krista04 chapter 3 . 8/22/2011
Post again soon. I'm interested to see your take on Severus/Mione. :)
| Burnedx2 chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
I do like your story. I wish the chapters were a little longer. But I'll take what I can get! I'll be looking forward to their confrontation.
| Ajremy9898 chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
| Jitus chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
Well, it is certainly interesting. So far it is classic "what if he survived..." story but even so it is clear that you probably won't continue in the way: "And then he was beloved by everyone, changed completely and fell in love with this girl before end of the chapter 5." I think you are going to take slower - and also more believable - path and I like it. I would like it even if the HGSS thing was just friendship and no romance and if she still married Ron - but it is up to you to decide.
Anyway I am looking forward to next chapters and I wish you to be able to stay on that quality you started. So good luck. :-)
| BestNameEver95 chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
Very nice ff so long! I really like it :)
| Bookman87 chapter 2 . 8/19/2011
Good stuff. Keep writing!
| Bookman87 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I like where this is headed. I feel that the "Oh crap, what do I do" moment that Hermione has really hearkens back to the first book and the Devil's Snare episode. I find that part of her character is a chink in the armor of her intellect. As long as nobody's going to die in the next two minutes, magic comes to her easily. But in the moment of crisis, she freezes and Harry steps up with the right answer, or an answer (we'll see if it was enough). And I love your portrayal of Ron..."Well, he screwed us, so screw him!", that, coupled with his utter buffoonery, hearken back to GoF and his feud with Harry.
All in all, good stuff. Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
| Gringotts713 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Its a good start I interested to see where you will take the story, thanks for writing
| crazfool chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Well this was a very satifying "what if Snape survived" fic!
| Wolf's Edge chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
WOW! Just wow! I really like that they are taking care of Snape and would love to see more of that in the future. Please update ASAP!
| Lion chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
This is perfect! I LOVE it! Please continue ASAP!