|Reviews for What a Mess!|
| MiccaF chapter 15 . 9/11
| Twilightlover2015 chapter 5 . 2/20
I liks this chapter but you forgot about the imprinting that he could be a brother too
| Calyptra chapter 3 . 1/26
I made a mistake in my previous review, I meant "passively smoked".
I know you used it to show that she is pregnant, but it's not like a glass of wine you can refuse. If you ever smoked pot or anything else in a closed room you should know it spreads rather quickly. A pregnant mother shouldn't willingly subject herself to that, nor should a father-to-be act so inconsiderate.
| Calyptra chapter 2 . 1/26
I liked the Story so far, one think rubbed me wrong however. Leah is pregnant and smoking pot. I don't care if anyone else does, everybody's body is their one and frankly alcohol isn't less harmless but still legal. A pregnant woman however is sharing her body with another helpless human being and ought to be considerate.
I know that some midwives recommend marihuana during pregnancy to help with morning sickness and anxiety and someone should slap them for that. Scientist aren't sure to which extent THC affects a foetus as woman are hesitant to admit having smoked pot while pregnant. What HAS been done discovered though is that THC travels via blood into the placenta. Researches have also shown a growth restriction and underweight newborns. Possible other more grave consequences haven't been outruled though.
I'm not sure I want to follow and support a writer who supports the consumption of drugs during pregnancy. It's irresponsible. You have to stop and think how many young girls are reading twilight fics. When you write something on a public site you carry some sort of responsibility. In this chapter no one present in the scene commented negatively on her smoking Burnside you include an author's note were you commented about it, to tell people not to do it even though you might need it for the story line. Don't get me wrong, I've reade books and fics about drug using mothers, but it always was in another light. It was always shown that it was wrong and the consequences were severe, kind of dramatic genre. You however are portraying it so harmlessly that it's almost criminal. I'm sad to say that I hope you don't have to ever see a baby that is born addicted to drugs or even isn't able to survive long after birth because it hasn't developed correctly (I'm not only talking about marijuana. There are crack babies etc.)
Please ladies if you are expecting think about the little ones and stay away from drugs for 9 months. Not only the hard ones, but also alcohol etc.
| rrochelle465 chapter 16 . 9/19/2015
This was a great story good job...,
| rrochelle465 chapter 14 . 9/19/2015
Wow jess is a seesaw. Up one minute down the next .she got the information at least she knows why her heart was hurting hopefully with time she will find the happiness she is looking for...
| rrochelle465 chapter 13 . 9/19/2015
Wow that was intense I am glad everything worked out and both Bella and embry has a new sibling on the way...
| rrochelle465 chapter 12 . 9/19/2015
Wow embry is freaking out and at a time like this ouch how will the guys be able to fix this...
| rrochelle465 chapter 11 . 9/19/2015
Thank you this is a great story...
| rrochelle465 chapter 10 . 9/19/2015
Wow Bella is ,it going to last long... I am happy that Paul is being patient...
| rrochelle465 chapter 9 . 9/19/2015
Wow what a party I hope embry man's up the both deserve to be happy...
| rrochelle465 chapter 8 . 9/19/2015
Wow that was an intense date night...I hope they have fun at the party...
| rrochelle465 chapter 7 . 9/19/2015
Wow there is a storm coming I hope they can get thru the next few days or weeks...hmmm I hope Sam is prepared...
| rrochelle465 chapter 6 . 9/19/2015
Well that was interesting I hope things work out for Jared and Kim...hmmm what will happen when it happens to embry?
| rrochelle465 chapter 5 . 9/19/2015
Yay I am glad he was finally able to tell her about imprinting and marking ...