Reviews for Duel Masters: Vortex Wars
Rajarshi chapter 5 . 11/11/2014
Great descriptions of the duels. BTW do you by any chance keep a count of the number of cards in the duelist's hands?
Sanokal chapter 20 . 10/31/2013
Another entertaining read. Having not been as up-to-date with Duel Masters as I'd like, the introduction of the Cross Gears and Vortex evolutions was handy.
Hopefully that's the last time Jamie gets used like that, poor girl.
Luxraylover chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
For a first chapter it's cool and awesome if anything the duel didn't last long and Cindy just looked ahh...scratchy and pathetic which I couldn't understand. May be she just wasn't up to the level after that horrifying experience last night which is perfectly reasonable. This chapter is more of a turmoil Jamie's facing than the final itself. I guess it'll improve. Let's not be any more skeptic than necessary and move on to the next one.
dawriterman chapter 20 . 7/24/2012
What a conclusion

Yeah! C.J. kicks Drake's butt in an epic duel
Oh man loved that duel that reallllllllllly was epic

Soul and Blaze phoenix yay!

and The part where you revive Sarina as cocco

Ingenious is all i can say

Wow C.J. finally gets his girl :D

;) and so i have finished ur awesome story and am moving on to cross force

Thumbs up to the writing :D

(Y)
dawriterman chapter 19 . 7/24/2012
another great chapter :D

Awesome duel

Am heading towards the conclusion :D yay!

Oh no Tsume and Sarina died T_T

T_T TT_TT TTT_TTT TTTTT_TTTTT TTTTTTTT_TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
dawriterman chapter 18 . 7/24/2012
Another chapter but this time couldnt see the duel i was waiting for

But no prob it is in the next chap :D

Just you wait Jamie C.J. is gonna knock some sense into you :D

And the strike back emeral combo was awesome :D

Also i loved the little part iwth Trox and Bolmy ;)
dawriterman chapter 17 . 7/24/2012
So am closing in on the end

Looks like Riley was the nicest of the lot

And we have a great duel

Got some good cards info and will use them :D

Are the five Xgears that drake plans to use on ending the world fictional ?

What the...Why is Jamie waiting for C.J. with evil intentions :/
dawriterman chapter 16 . 7/23/2012
So we end another awesome duel with the appearance of

DORBALLOM

and then we have some past about the Genocide dragon

YEah 2 wins 1 more to go

You can do it KG
dawriterman chapter 15 . 7/23/2012
So we have a great duel and the secret of
Dante's change of heart.

Such fathers should be killed _

Great duel

ALPHADIOS was overkill :D :D :D :D
dawriterman chapter 14 . 7/21/2012
Oh Jeez i guess i should apologise to JAmie (if i could)
I thought she was a murderer but she saved Niki after alll

SO Team KG and team Avatar are ready to take on Team Drake

Guess we are gonna see some awesome duels no doubt.

Love the way you made up Sarina's genealogy

Well the first duel is between Jake and Dante

GO JAKE

P.S. Did u take Dante from Dante's Inferno as you took C.J. From GTA?
dawriterman chapter 13 . 7/21/2012
First of all the chapters a very emotional one

Finally Karon and JAke get Alphadios and DOrballom
Have to say the description of their evolution was superb !

And now Drake gives his ultimatum and Jamie kills,,Niki

WTF!

Jamie you heartless brute

Maria's progress is good but what will S.J. do when he finds 0ut Jamie killed Niki

Gotta find that out :D
dawriterman chapter 12 . 7/21/2012
What?

Wyatt the egotist starnoid has a crush on Dylan's sis ?
Wow you aure add a twist D:

Then we have Jamie save C.J. and Sarina from C.J.'s old friend who taught him Kaijudo?

AWESOME

And finally we have the best creatures in the light and dark civs :D

Come on Karon Jake dont give up they are worth the effort. :D
dawriterman chapter 11 . 7/21/2012
Another awesome chapter finished.

So C.J. is getting trained by Sarina and he surprises her :D

Hmm even i dont remeber how C.J. Learned the Kaijudo art maybe from that guy he met in the park.

And we have a good duel but Sarina And SP kich C.J.'s ass T_T he didnt even get Tsume out.

Tsume's character is my favourite :D the way he teases C.J. and his witty remarks are awesome. And now we have a crazy reptile (eww i hate snakes) coming to kill them on Drake's orders.

Well LEts see
dawriterman chapter 10 . 7/21/2012
Awesome chapter :D

sorry been some time before i reviewed
had exams .

Ok first of all the humour is great

Drake reveals his plans to Jamie yet she accepts ? hmm

Sarina socks C.J. and then kisses here...

Wow so we have the Sarina X C.J. :D

So lets see what they will do to "save"Drake
dawriterman chapter 9 . 7/12/2012
This chapter has two great (and) surprising things

1. What the ... Sarina's father comes and almost obliterates her. What are you doing Jamie? Come on What has that Drake done

2. C.J. you will obliterate Jamie ...WOWOWWOWOW

This shows till what extent we make sacrifices sometimes

And there were some great descriptions of emotions in this chapter too

Worthy of getting added to DM's cover story :D :D
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