Reviews for DKD: Retelling
CrystalOfTime chapter 5 . 9/28/2015
Good job!
DarknessFromWithin chapter 5 . 9/4/2013
coool and read my demon wife! it's funny
DarknessFromWithin chapter 4 . 9/4/2013
read my demon wife, it's funny
DarknessFromWithin chapter 3 . 9/4/2013
read my demon wife, it's good
DarknessFromWithin chapter 2 . 9/4/2013
Read my demon wife!
DarknessFromWithin chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
cool and read My Demon Wife
Blade1986 chapter 5 . 3/21/2013
Definitely interesting story you have here.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/14/2012
Please go to the beach school
Guest chapter 5 . 6/3/2012
continue if your still ALIVE!
SAmaster01 chapter 2 . 5/21/2012
Okay, well written, but there are some flaws. One thing, make sure to start a new line every time a new character speaks, it's a rule for a reason. Fortunately your paragraphs are small enough that it's not impossible to read. Secondly, make larger chapters, more than one page, because the amount of storytelling we are given is too small. Thirdly, you seem to be sticking too close to the script to warrant writing this up. You can keep doing so if you wish, but just make sure you know what you are doing.

-Sincerely SAmaster01
L to Light chapter 5 . 5/4/2012
Good story very acurate to the anime. PM me when you make another chapter.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/21/2012
continue the story
Sister-fan chapter 5 . 1/10/2012
Umbra8191 chapter 5 . 1/3/2012
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
phonic chapter 5 . 1/3/2012
To lazy to sign in. but this story, dare I say it, is over 9000
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