|Reviews for Boink|
| OtakuofHorror chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
Wait... dafuq?! I approve of the closet hiding from Japan but Prussia? Nah... he's more the person to hide under the bed and... Why exactly can't Gilbert leave? I bet he could run like hell if Germany woke up.
Huh? Whats wrong?
London: Ai and Oji Puroisen didnt invite me...
Uh... Don't you consider Veneziano and Germany your parents in a way?
London: Consider? No. They are.
London: And whats so wrong with watching my parents fuck?
A lot... even if they aren't your blood parents...
London: Fuck you... I'm going to see if Oji Puroisen will give me a copy of that video...
Have fun... Sorry about her... OCs... ahaha...
| luciellen chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
A friend recommended this to me, and I have to say your smut writing skills are amazing for a beginner :)) I've written like, two smuts but you're honestly better than me...
Anyways, I love how Prussia and Japan were in the closet XD
| HetaliaHeart chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Lol Prussia I expected this From you but Japan ? Loved this story :3
| silver Alida chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Oh Gilbert and Kiku... Camera spys for yaoi forever.
This was extremely cute and the "special" scene was good yet it switched from adorable to Whoa...
I have a feeling that this was Ludwig's first time as well as it mentioned him remembering a manual for this. I assume all other knowledge comes from his magazines.
Thanks for writing this!
| Amaya1301 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
This was amazing! Not only did it have adorable romance, it was funny as well xD I was cracking up then saying awwwww~
This was a really good story and I loved it! Also loved the ending xD
Thank you for writing this and keep up the good work! :3
| Crystal Hope Dragon chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Amazing! This was well writen, with many original sideparts, and you kept the mains in character!(not everyone, but them) Please keep up the good work.
| Mollz33 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
That was great :D
I especially loved the sweetness with Germany at the end. I haven't seen many fics where Germany is that caring about how Italy felt after sex
| nena92 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
! awesome! super! i like it! bsci da nena92
| SouthParkFirefly chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Naughty, naughty Kiku!
Such a little perv what would China say (i ship them)?
Are you sure that was your first it was really awesome!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
First thing in the morning, I decide to check mail.
Debates on whether I should read it (it's the frickin' morning after all. No breakfast or anything yet).
Sees 'M' rating.
Yeah, what the heck? Some smut in the morning is no terrible harm. (I think. Yeah, nothing bad will happen... right?.
Anyway, I love~ how you potrayed Germany's thoughts around the beginning when Gilbert came and brought up the topic. Though I do think you could have written the more steamy scenes a bit better, but it's pretty good for someone who's doing it on his/her first time.