Reviews for Bad PickUp Lines
Hardcore-nellie12-fan chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
Loved it. Your note in the end made me laugh.
stoleyouaway chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
In case you hadn't noticed, I'm slowly getting around to reading all of your stories because I think you're a genius. This was simple smut and it was still do well written. Once again, loved it!
Faerie of Tara chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Nice job! ;)
mulder1921 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
GUH. So good.
Elizabeth Magenta chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Wow. Brilliant fic :)

I loved how you used the third person, but still not be anyway sided with one or the other.

RPFs are my guilty pleasure, so thank you!
boredandhomealone chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Loved it! The hurried pace of it was actually quite appropriate to the story. Wonderful job!
shadowjardis chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Very hot :) I thoroughly enjoyed this
midlifecrisses chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I had something wonderful and coherent to say at the beginning of the smut - but now my words seem to have vanished. O_o
mardie186 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I dunno, I think there should be a sequel where Chris is the f'er and Darren is the f'ee. Maybe as punishment for Darren's awful pickup lines. I am sure Chris could come up with some doozies to use on Darren!
njferrell chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
The lines might have been bad...but, they worked! Well!