|Reviews for Power|
| Katie chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I really like this story. I think this is truly something Bella would do.
| XxXRegretXxX chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
I loved Bellatrix in this. It fit her so very well.
Great job. Keep writing! :)
| pen7sword chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
This is awesome...:) It's so amazing. I love it. It's like you can read her mind.
| controlled climb chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
First of all, well done for entering this competition. You’ve entered a lovely piece. So I’ve been asked to not reveal the scores, but if you’re interested or need to ask about the review, please don’t hesitate to PM me.
Your grammar in this was pretty good. The only thing that annoyed me was your use of commas that was a bit astray at times, particularly using them before the word ‘and’. You don’t often have to use commas before that word so every time you do, I would advise that you double check to be sure.
I feel that the idea of Rodolphus calling her ‘Bella’ was somewhat out of character, merely because I only ever remember Narcissa calling her that. I think the nic-name is meant to represent a sort of attachment or perhaps vulnerability, which clearly…Bellatrix doesn’t exhibit in this piece.
Other than that, I do love the idea of Bellatrix teasing Rodolphus as she did in this piece. I can see her as being a woman that has a bit of a dominatrix streak when it comes to sex. The idea of her being so eager to prove her dominance to actually endanger them with Aurors was fantastic and a brilliant idea.
The theme was apparently throughout the entire piece which was good—you definitely fulfilled the competition requirements on that aspect.
Overall you’ve submitted a great piece for the competition that was both thrilling and enjoyable. I wish you the best of luck with the rest of your scores in the competition.
| MagneticSinceIWasABaby chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
| Catatonic Muse chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Ooh, I liked this one! It takes quite a bit of skill to write Belladolphus convincingly, and you certainly succeeded!
I think I like this Bella. In fact, I like her a lot. She's certainly a lot stronger than in most Bellamort fics.
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Twisted... wicked... but nice. She's a bitch indeed, but we wouldn't have her any other way..
| obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
That's a shocker! :O nice job, you're wonderful with the black sisters. :) great work!