|Reviews for Without Naruto|
| Eirdaru chapter 3 . 8/19/2011
This is so sad that it made me cry, I'd like to read more because it needs a decisive ending, even if its tragic. This is a well written story.
| alphaprincess0803 chapter 3 . 8/19/2011
Aw... you made me cry...
| Molly Bergstrom chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
Bwuh. I'm normally a slacker who reads without reviewing, but this really got to me. Very poignant.
| Zankaru Zelladonii chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
Must have more.
| Firehedgehog chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
sniffles.. so dark and sad
| Saphroneth chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
Naruto really is the light of the setting, isn't he? Without him, the world does indeed seem a darker place.
Very nicely done, and I hope you continue with this line.
Have to wonder what Akatsuki will do now... and for that matter how Tsunade will react...
| scotty26 chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
thank you for posting this story up..i finally got around to it and like always am impress by it..especially how the rest of Team 7 has reacted towards Naruto death...how far along are u going to take this? because it will be an interesting read to find out more about how the other characters reacted towards Naruto death
keep up the good work as always
| AvoidedIsland chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I've always secretly enjoyed very angsty/tragedy driven story. I mean really enjoy...the closer to tears, the better. It's almost cathartic (not sure if that's the right word to use...but it's the closest I can think of to convey my thoughts). I've always felt the worst for Kakashi, despite his flaws. I assume Iruka or the Sandaime are next?
| Hammerchuckery chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
This gets dark fast. ._.
| Hammerchuckery chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Very nice, except for the Uchiha's, "NoNoNoNoNoNoNo! Not my team too!".
| PollyW chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
I have cried all the time.
| Hektols chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
Poor Kakashi, he must feel cursed. Will someone appear to save him?
| Perspicacity chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
This is not a very cheerful story, though it seems it's not intended to be.
The only quibble I have is that if the fox were able to heal Naruto from near death (a hole punched through his chest?) you'd think he'd be able to heal a few senbon.
The place in canon where Naruto can't heal from his wounds is in his fight with Kabuto, where his heart arteries are cut. Perhaps some allusion to this might make that section a little more consistent with canon.
Nice work otherwise. The Kakashi suicide was done particularly well.
| Anon42 chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
If Kakashi DOES suicide, I don't think Naruto will be all that damn happy, especially as in Naruto-verse, the existence of an afterlife as all but been officially confirmed.
Also, sadder than the usual stuff I read, but still pretty good. It definitely holds my interest in a vice-grip.
| Kurama's Foxy Rose chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
Someone worthy of the his summoning contract, huh? I'd say Hinata would be a good choice; not only does it suit her skills and her personality ensure Pakkun and the others were in good hands, she has always respected Naruto.