|Reviews for Without Naruto|
| CelticReaper chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
update soon please
| In The Mix chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
This is so sad!
I love it! Please UPdate soon!
| master fireball chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
sadder than your usual fare but great i know you already have a lot of stories but i had an idea that i think you could do well, nagato leaves rain and becomes famous for killing hanzo who many considered the strongest ninja so nagato of the rinnegan becomes the strongest ninja in the world he rocovers from the damage he suffered and travels to his mothers homeland and discovers his connection to the uzumaki clan and finds a family tree a little research and he finds about a leaf ninja kushina uzumaki so he heads there but finds naruto lets say about age 3 and cloud has tried to kidnap hinata which they once tried to do to kushina so he attacks them if he can destroy half of leaf then he should do a lot of damage to cloud after all the third war would have just ended also he should have hanzo as a path instead of yahiko so cloud would be humbled then he could stay in the village and raise naruto and everyone would have forced smiles hoping he doesnt kill them all ans the sandaime learning jiraiya trained him tries to make a case for him being godaime rock would bemoan someone worse than minato taking his place
| Highvalour chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
He spared the daughter and grandchild. Thats nice, they get to live until the Kyuubi reforms in a few years and levels Wave country just for being there.
R.I.P Kakashi Hatake, He's served his time in hell.
| Highvalour chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
Wait, did Madara and other members of the akatsuki attend the funeral? And even after Sakura pointed them out no one reacted?
| puffdadder chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
| Wingwyrm chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
! Kakashi! Oh, the poor boy! I want to tell him it'll get better, but without Naruto he really has no one, does he? D: *tears up* Oh, Kakashi...
You are a very emotional writer. I love it!
| puffdadder chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
you have such a fascinating style of writing. You write well, cleverly, yondaime making Naruto de-facto hokage, and writing up different perspectives so seamlessly to help us connect to the characters. You're an inspiration. :)
| dzk87 chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
Well, I love your Kakashi characterization. I suppose the fact that everybody is(somewhat) in character in every story at all times, and when they aren't, you don't do it to bash, is one of the reasons I follow your stories so readily...
Yeah, I can see him doing this...
| puffdadder chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
wow. This is really good. Sasuke as a believable emo, instead of screaming TEACH ME! Hmm, wondering how you're gonna spin this, will it be forever serious, or will there be a naruto respawned as a rat. oh wait, wrong story. XP
| Vallavarayan chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
idont know what to say...
u are being extra depressing this past week.
| dzk87 chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
Trollolol. Even in a sad story, you find the time to poke fun at eveyrthing, by having Tobi, and the Akatsuki sitting around in the funeral. And no, the Kyuubi probably is NOT dead... It's impossible that NO jinchuuriki had ever died before.
| Hektols chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
So Sakura is going to give up being a ninja? Interesting.
What is going to happen with the Kyuubi? It has been stated that the bijuus eventually reappear a time after the jinchuuriki's death.
It also would be interesting to see how things would turn without Naruto at the Chuunin Exams and the reactions from the rest of Naruto's friends, specially Hinata.
| Hektols chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Good to see that Naruto's heritage was revealed and received a hero's funeral. There are too many fics where he is thought to be dead but the Hokage decides to not tell anything.
| Sarah1281 chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
I'm not really sure that I buy that Minato could really officially name an infant his successor (or that he had the time to, for that matter) but I figure that Hiruzen is the Hokage and as long as the few select people who could object don't then he can do what he wants.
I'm going to assume that pretty much everyone (except maybe the bad guys) are worse off for Naruto being dead. Is this an AU where killing the host kills the demon forever or where it eventually rematerializes? So far we've got Sasuke even more revenge-focused (will Itachi even have to remotivate him at this point?) and Sakura apparently quitting the ninja program. And with those two Kyuubi-chakra eating brothers (how they managed to eat its chakra I will never understand), technically Madara's not even thwarted.