Reviews for Passion For Glory
WyldClaw chapter 15 . 3/29/2012
i completely understand. i think i will go back al review the chapters of aura adventure that i have not gotten around to
Animeniak chapter 15 . 3/29/2012
WHAT! Just when I was starting to enjoy this fic, I am not huge Pokémon fan but this was an amazing fic.

I think you may have missed a great chance with this one.
Lunary Canary chapter 15 . 3/27/2012
Aww, its understandable :l its always cool to have a journey fic but then it gets boring after a while when the storylines repeat. I wish you good luck on your future stories! :D
AA fan chapter 14 . 3/17/2012
pleeeeeeeease just bring aura adventure back please! I bet tons of people agree with me! so just please bring if back! Iiked it better then this fic!
Lunary Canary chapter 14 . 2/15/2012
Aww :l I respect your descision. Sometimes I need to take breaks away from my stories to brainstorm too. Good luck! _
WyldClaw chapter 14 . 2/11/2012
take your time
littlmiget123 chapter 13 . 1/8/2012
It wasn't a filler chapter, silly. XD If it explains a past or something, then it isn't filler. Believe me, this is probably my favorite chapter of the story so far. Why? Because it shows emotion, friendship, character development. My eyes were glued to the screen. I just wanted to reach in and hug Lex. :(

Something I've noticed is that you don't really say the genders of their Pokemon. What I do in my story is have the characters say 'him' or 'her' when referring to their Pokemon so the readers know the gender of their Pokemon.

'Lex gazed fondly after it. She'd owned Psyduck since it was a baby, three years ago.' I think you mean Taz?

' "Sleeping out in a tent will be fun as." ' Fun as...? Or maybe just get rid of 'as'.

Well, that's it! I'm all caught up finally. Now I'm really looking forward to next chapter. But this was a really great chapter; probably my favorite so far. Anyways, good luck with the next chapter, and see you next update! :D
littlmiget123 chapter 12 . 1/7/2012
Merry Christmas and a Happy new year to you as well! :D Cynthia stood down as champion? Who took her place, then, I wonder? Sorry for the short review, I'm trying to catch up. XD But this chapter was good, and I enjoyed it. - But there weren't any errors here, so good job on that! :D
littlmiget123 chapter 11 . 1/7/2012
Great twist for the Meadow. It definetely made the boring Floaroma Town exciting. - LOL! Taz is hilarious, and is really like me. That's really how I look and act in the morning if I get woken up. XD I'd really like if a chapter or two was focused on her. She hasn't really done much..

'her bright green sparkling under the morning sun.' There's a word missing here. XD

'pulled his notebook from the backpack her wore' he wore.

Bray catching Heracross was definetely a surprising capture. The Pokemon your charaters capture are always unique; I like it. - Anyways, off to the next chapter!
WyldClaw chapter 13 . 1/7/2012
poor lex. it must have been hard for her
Lunary Canary chapter 13 . 1/5/2012
Oh yay! Backstory! Taz, class battles technically are battles.

Lex's story was sad and understandable. She has a duty to Rowan, but I really think she shouldn't be in a rush, especially when she was 10. I'm glad she got experience under her belt before starting the journey. I think you should've waited a few chapters, let Lex's absense simmer for a bit before bringing her back. I like the idea of her tagging along with the new people for a few days, like a guide. I really want her and Chase together XD

Ahem. Anyway.

2 weeks? Seriously? They need to save the trouble and just take a bus. My god.
Hotrod198 chapter 12 . 1/4/2012
Well I finally got aroudn to reading this, and I'm reviewing this chapter specifically and I think you know why. The story is good so far so well done on that.

However, I'm pretty sure I know that Clayton guy from somewhere. Perhaps an abandoned fic? ;)
Lunary Canary chapter 12 . 12/25/2011
Aww, they were all together for christmas

Nice battle :P Surprising though, I thought that since they're all in school they would've been over pokemon from johto. Hmm. Well, there is a whole world out there to learn about

I know I already said it, but merry christmas! :D
WyldClaw chapter 12 . 12/25/2011
i really enjoyed it. the battle sure kept me entertained.

who will take cynthia's place as champion now
Lunary Canary chapter 11 . 12/22/2011
._.

5. 30. I'm sorry, I cannot...how do you...even wake a whole town at 5:30? They better be giving out free breakfast at ihop, shoot.

Ha. Heracross seemed much stronger than Shinx, and I was actually hoping Bray would return it from that darn Fury Attack. It seems like a good addition to the team tho :P
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