Reviews for The Pitfall
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 3 . 8/19
First time writing smut? It was good haha! Good writing. I’ve never written it either so I can only imagine how hard it is
i-read-there4-i-am chapter 16 . 3/5
If the aurors are really in need of help you'd think the brightest witch of the age would be first on the list
i-read-there4-i-am chapter 2 . 3/4
Last famous words
Serennos chapter 19 . 2/20
Won’t Lucius already know about the baby through the Family Tree scroll?
Serennos chapter 20 . 2/20
This is great, can’t stop reading, even long enough to write more reviews...
Shantigal chapter 2 . 2/8
Intriguing.
everleigh chapter 17 . 1/6
this is moving.
Leonita Yap chapter 31 . 9/30/2020
Oh nooo...I felt you Hermione. Poor Draco..
Leonita Yap chapter 28 . 9/30/2020
Why it's so beautiful anw. They would separate...
Leonita Yap chapter 20 . 9/29/2020
Ron was awful. And Harry, I love you! I even loved Blaise and Luna. They really helped the couple..
Leonita Yap chapter 15 . 9/29/2020
This story so beautiful! O my gosh. Both of them so bloodyy stupid eh? How they didn't know their real feeling. I love you blaise-luna. You helped them a lot. I love Draco and Hermione. They had so many similarities.
Leonita Yap chapter 9 . 9/28/2020
Finally! Zabini, you rock!
Leonita Yap chapter 8 . 9/28/2020
Oh my goodness. I'm falling in love with this story!
Seniia7 chapter 20 . 8/27/2020
love harry
Seniia7 chapter 19 . 8/27/2020
i really don't get why harry and the weasleys feel betrayed everytime they find out she's involved with draco?! i mean... she has no obligation to them, she won't force them all to be friends, it's her business who she shares her vagina with...
and how the fuck was she cheating the weasel when they weren't even a couple at the time? so what if he loved her? nobody is obligated to stay single just because their ex still loves them... it's a fucked up way of thinking
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