Reviews for The Pitfall
meduza chapter 1 . 11/13
What the hell is that? I read it on the recommendation of a friend but she was probably playing with me, what a complete garbage of history, a waste of time really.. Your Hermione is fucking pathetic.
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 3 . 8/19/2021
First time writing smut? It was good haha! Good writing. I’ve never written it either so I can only imagine how hard it is
i-read-there4-i-am chapter 16 . 3/5/2021
If the aurors are really in need of help you'd think the brightest witch of the age would be first on the list
i-read-there4-i-am chapter 2 . 3/4/2021
Last famous words
Serennos chapter 19 . 2/20/2021
Won’t Lucius already know about the baby through the Family Tree scroll?
Serennos chapter 20 . 2/20/2021
This is great, can’t stop reading, even long enough to write more reviews...
Shantigal chapter 2 . 2/8/2021
Intriguing.
everleigh chapter 17 . 1/6/2021
this is moving.
Leonita Yap chapter 31 . 9/30/2020
Oh nooo...I felt you Hermione. Poor Draco..
Leonita Yap chapter 28 . 9/30/2020
Why it's so beautiful anw. They would separate...
Leonita Yap chapter 20 . 9/29/2020
Ron was awful. And Harry, I love you! I even loved Blaise and Luna. They really helped the couple..
Leonita Yap chapter 15 . 9/29/2020
This story so beautiful! O my gosh. Both of them so bloodyy stupid eh? How they didn't know their real feeling. I love you blaise-luna. You helped them a lot. I love Draco and Hermione. They had so many similarities.
Leonita Yap chapter 9 . 9/28/2020
Finally! Zabini, you rock!
Leonita Yap chapter 8 . 9/28/2020
Oh my goodness. I'm falling in love with this story!
Seniia7 chapter 20 . 8/27/2020
love harry
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