Reviews for Descent
Masato Nakajima chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
Poor Jinxy, nice little two shot :D
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
Nudge nudge prod prod. Well, mon ami? Get going! ;)
BassNotBass chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
really cool i want more!
amelia delling chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
please do another chpater it's good i like it, update soon! XD
dude305 chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
i like it so far and it's fits really well with what we know Jinx is like please do another chapter because you could eventually make it into a long flinx story.
Random Peep chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
Ahh I love it! Awesome job, though you accidentally put the last paragraph in twice. But anyways, of coarse I would love to see this continue, but even if it doesn't it's still an awesome 2-shot! P
I'm a Lover not a Hater chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
Nice although one little mistake: I think you type the last line twice.
Concolor44 chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
Don't like Shimmer. Never did. Cold-hearted bitch. Figures the Headmistress would send her, though. Mammoth would do whatever she asked.

We don't mind that the chapter's short. At least it's here! ;-)
Shepard590 chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
Its good I. Think if you wanted to you could do one more chapter I don't think it needs it but it would be cool if you did. Also I would like to get your take on some story ideas I have if you have time there not chapters or any thing yet just plots I want to see what you think about them sp if you have time pm me
Sheerwillpower chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
my god, you are so right!
I'm a Lover not a Hater chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Yes please put in another chapter.
moe little chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I fair liked this:) I'm keen for another chapter!
The True Silent Reader chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Awesome and sad all at once. I think it deserves another chapter.
Random Peep chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Ahh poor Jinx, I loved it, awesome job. I'd like to see a second chapter if your up for it, heck you could write a whole other RaeJinx story from this; with Raven trying to figure out Jinx or something. Lol but anyways, completely up too you so if not, this was a sad awesome one-shot, if you continue I look forward to more hee hee! P
Shepard590 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I liked it I think one more chapter would be good show how the hive found her I did find one mistake Daniel is the only think keeping her there it should be thing not think but other than that it was a good story
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