Reviews for Love, feigned & hidden
puppycat145 chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
Hi I bearly just finished reading the first chapter and I'm already in love with this story and I loved that part when hichigo says someone has to nock of those rosé glass of yours (or something like that ) I thought it was pure genuines can u PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a shanks x luffy story I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT
Guest chapter 7 . 6/9/2014
Wonderful, brilliant, well-done! Amazing, to say the least!
You can discern a good romance fiction when it makes you feel every bit of emotion being portrayed, and this gorgeous work of art did just that. I truly admire one who is able to take the art of words and create something with such volume and quality. The story was engaging, captivating, and I found myself devouring each chapter, regardless of the low Lemon count. This is the kind of Yaoi I love.
The grammar, however, could use work, along with punctuation and word placement. I understand that the speech parts were tweaked to meet a casual "street" tone, but even then it was kind of choppy, no offense. But those menial complaints are negligible compared to the splendorous appeal that emanates from this delicious work of fiction.
If half, HALF, of the other fictions on this site where a quarter as good as this one, I would have died of blood loss LONG ago!
Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
You should've put a sex scene with ichigo and hichigo
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Loved it!
Beccabu32 chapter 7 . 10/1/2012
so sweet
XXanime.manga-it-calls-meXX chapter 7 . 6/22/2012
awww y all my fav stories have to end? this fic was amazing 3
Jenkin chapter 7 . 12/7/2011
Cute ending. :)
Jenkin chapter 2 . 12/7/2011
Grimmjow really being and ass isnt he? lol
AnjoRemix chapter 7 . 10/5/2011
omg i'm sooo favoring u now! 3 i love ur style of writing! 3
ravensterling123 chapter 7 . 9/12/2011
Loved the story overall! :D
Akilika chapter 7 . 9/11/2011
Very nice, loved the whole thing.
LadyDragon17 chapter 7 . 9/11/2011
that was really good, i'd like to read another one of yours sometime. i also fineally understand what Disabuse means! i think...
ravensterling123 chapter 5 . 9/2/2011
Great chapter!
ravensterling123 chapter 4 . 8/29/2011
Amazing chapter :)
rentamiya chapter 3 . 8/29/2011

so where's the next one? _

please I certainly want some more
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