|Reviews for What took you so long'|
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/28
the story so far is good, please keep going, can't wait for your next chapter.
I like the continued search for balance and the implied ability for John to find redemption even if he has been turned into a half demon. Will any of the other characters be brought in? or are you going to introduce new characters?
| endertrree chapter 6 . 2/3/2015
This is AMAZING
| Rem chapter 6 . 1/20/2013
Very cool story!
| caligo-lux chapter 6 . 12/16/2012
okay...i liked it...its quite well written
but gosh...chas grates on my nerves with his bible stuff, i know he has reasons to be that way but damn its annoying _
and lol to the : Chas uses power of love...i suddenly had the image of chas in a sailor moon dress, holding a moonzepter in baltazars face, in my mind XD
| cm chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
excellent opening chapter on an under-rated movie. I really enjoyed this.
| misaria chapter 1 . 8/28/2011