Reviews for Two Lonely Children
kurifu gari chapter 6 . 4/18
I really hope you keep updating this story. quick question will they be picking all the jurinchuriki's up ? anywho, loving the story not many Hyuuga dumps hinata and naruto finds her and takes care of her stories around anymore. so, thanx
Jewlbunny chapter 6 . 4/16
Sorry it took so long to read, I had things to do. I really enjoyed this. Hope to read more soon.
Stormbane chapter 6 . 4/13
Lovin' this story! Please update soon!
gummy b3ars chapter 6 . 4/13
update pls
Icesetokill chapter 6 . 4/12
Really loving the story so far. Keep up the great work
Sailor Pandabear chapter 6 . 4/10
mds777 chapter 6 . 4/10
A part of me is hoping that Fu, Chomei's jinchuuriki, joins their group in this little adventure. Sweet story by the way. :)
dksamuri chapter 6 . 4/8
A little to blatant, but not horrible either. Needs plot line work
Guest chapter 6 . 4/3
Your story is coming along nicely.
Dragon Man 180 chapter 6 . 4/4
Please have Jiraiya figure out about the ox cart at least. He has the spy network, he should be able to find that much out. If Naruto and Hinata make it to Kumo, can Yugito come along as 'Mama Cat' or in Iwa Roshi as 'Big Brother Ape' Han as 'Hot Horse', Taki Fu as 'Rare Bug', Kiri Ukataka as 'floating bubbles' or something?
apeljohn chapter 6 . 4/3
Glad to see this is still updating. Am thoroughly enjoying the torment of Jiraiya :)
Ayrmed chapter 6 . 4/3
It's actually cool to have the extra incite to Jiraiya's character. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Leaf Ranger chapter 6 . 4/3
Wow. Poor Jiraiya.

So Gaara now has joined Naruto and Hinata. Nice. *nods* Keep up the awesome work!
Naruhinalover20 chapter 6 . 4/3
Nice chapter i wonder if Tsunade will make a appearance before naruto goes back home
Nerfhearder69 chapter 5 . 12/25/2014
A good story that needs to be continued. Good work!
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