Reviews for Two Lonely Children
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 1/22
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 6 . 12/3/2016
I think they should come back a lot stronger atleast chunin level please update soon
Wantlesseight chapter 2 . 7/27/2016
kizoku.ouninaru chapter 6 . 6/25/2016
i like the way this was written
good plot
great coverage
and good writing style

i hope to see more of it
Mullyda chapter 6 . 5/29/2016
Great FF, realy great. If only the autor would meke Naruto and Hinata a little les mature so they would act like 8 or 9 years old they are.
But please add the next chapter soon.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/21/2016
I know your busy all the time but this is one of my favorite stories I read so far.
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
rjroy309 chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
Loved your story love to read it repeatedly
thebestoftherest chapter 6 . 12/13/2015
Good story hope for another chapter in the near future.
jupimako chapter 6 . 6/16/2015
More? There should be more. This is a fantastic story.
marquis.shax chapter 6 . 5/24/2015
I really hope you get a few more chapters out fast as it's already been close to 2 months since this chapter came out and while I just stumbled across the story I find it really good and am looking forward to see where you take it. Also tormenting Jiraiya isn't so bad hell I think he deserves it a little bit considering it was never explained why he was never there for Naruto but I believe he at least got Naruto presents on his birthday and probably also provided Naruto with money that the hokage gave him. The one who REALLY deserves to be tormented is Kakashi as he's a lazy bastard who if it weren't for the Uchiha massacre would've probably done all in his power to get a full team of Uchihas just so he wouldn't really have to do much teaching lol
marquis.shax chapter 3 . 5/23/2015
hmm I'm surprised you didn't have Hiruzen send a message to Tsunade as a backup plan in case Jiraiya couldn't do anything considering she IS related to Naruto by blood since her grandmother was an Uzumaki
JD98 chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
Good story, look forward to reading more.
Roxie.88 chapter 6 . 5/10/2015
Great chapter! I look forward to their training an what adventures await.
Scarllete chapter 6 . 4/30/2015
This is great please update as soon as you can!
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