|Reviews for Keehlhauled|
| MafiaMarshMello chapter 1 . 11/11/2016
This is totally how I envision a Mello x OC, and you nailed it. Love you, man. Awesome.
Have a chocolate bar (yeah, I took it without HIS DAMN PERMISSION.)
Updates? And Mello...I can't envision him as the dumb blonde, since he also has great deduction skills in the canon but...lol XD that got me laughing.
Dish ish goldsh.
| ireallyamtellingthetruth chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
Oh my absolute cocoa deity I LOVE this story! It is exactly what I've been looking for, argh it's so amazing! There have been so many trial and errors regarding my desire for a quality OC Death Note story, and now I'm in love! Ah, I simply love Mir, she's such a strong, hilarious and funny character. And I like how Mello is in this story, he's but just angry for no reason like in so many others but in this one his anger is provoked and justified! I will admit, I felt a little bad for Matt when he was left alone and couldn't find Mello. ;-;
Other than that, please keep up the amazing work! I simply can't WAIT for the next chapter! XD
| tenshi-no-akuma-81 chapter 5 . 12/22/2011
I must say I'm impressed and that's something quite rare. My only advice for you is to keep it slow on the romance. Develop the friendship first before you even consider moving on to romance.
~Tenshi and Akuma
| Mangafreak666 chapter 5 . 12/13/2011
good day to you!
i love your story!
i can't wait to find out what happens next in the story!
please update soon!
| PyroTalons chapter 5 . 12/13/2011
XD SILENCE IS GOLDEN, DUCT TAPE IS SILVER!
They MUST fall in love now. *nods head to self* Since they hate each other, obviously. IT'Z LIKE A CLICHé RULE FOR FANFICTION! HATE LOVE!
OMK, I love Alice. xD Snarglewarp. I'm gonna call my friend that the next time I see her.
Y B NO MAKE APPEARANCE? D:
Nyah. You. Upate soon, onegai shimasu?
| Frogata chapter 5 . 12/13/2011
That last bit was cuuuuute~
I think that there should be HEAPS of romance! ALL THE ROMANCE! Cos I loooooooooove Mello! And he loves me. :)
Alice completely reminds me of my friend... She runs around in circles going CHA~! and giggles like a moron after. XD
Well, I don't really have anything else to say but update soon. :D
| Glitterthorn chapter 5 . 12/13/2011
Matt's gonna like Alice. *leans back, nibbling celebratory chocolate* Naturally. XD
Yet another amazing chapter- how do you do it? Keep up the good work!
| translucentMist chapter 4 . 11/24/2011
It's nice to know that Matt cares about Mello so much Really, it's cute!
| Frogata chapter 4 . 11/14/2011
Wew! Update! Poor Matty, he must be saaaad!
Also is there going to be... romaaaaance? *wiggles eyebrows*
Cos I LOVE MelloxOC. That stuff is like CRACK to me. XD
Anyway, please try not to take as long to update as before!
| PyroTalons chapter 4 . 11/14/2011
Nyaaaaaaah, awesome story! And I love the name! 100% perfect! Now onto actually reviewing...
Woo, I bet next chapter gifts with an awake-and probably more than a little angry-Mello. I only hope Alice and Mir won't deprive him of chocolate! And that mysterious hooded boss of theirs...*chuckles under breath* "Beyond", eh?
Update soon, Nyah!
| Glitterthorn chapter 4 . 11/14/2011
YES! I was right! :) I'm so glad you finally updated! Try and upload chapters when you finish them, okay? I love this story. XD
| translucentMist chapter 3 . 9/21/2011
Awesome chapter! So happy you updated~~
Is the boss BB? Because... you said jam. And the boss wants to kill Kira soo... xD I'm probably wrong anyways.
Alice... Y U SO PERVERTED?
Update soon! _
| Frogata chapter 3 . 9/20/2011
Whoooooaaaaaaa, I am glued to the screen. But not any more cos there are only 3 chapters so far and I was like "awww..."
That... Didn't make much sense... ANYWAY! So far this story has caught my eye big-time! Alice reminds me of Misa... Which scares me... XS
Update soon, cos from the looks of it I shall be sticking with this story!
| Glitterthorn chapter 3 . 9/20/2011
Really? Awwww... thanks! *hug* I think part of the reason it's so epic is the title. I mean, that was just so clever! And it's hilarious and has good grammar to boot, so... yeah. Amazing. Epic. XD
Awesome chapter! Poor Mirati... poor Mello, for that matter. *wince* He's not going to be having any fun. At all. Then again... XD *pervert* As for the boss... I'm gonna have to go with... BB. Because you said jam. If I'm wrong... Whatever, I suck at these games anyway. XD
| RandomAsRainbows chapter 2 . 8/27/2011
what was on the card?