Reviews for Double Fudge
Kelsey441 chapter 3 . 5/15/2017
Kelsey441 chapter 2 . 5/15/2017
In this chapter, it should be "He and so many" instead of "Him and so many."
Kelsey441 chapter 2 . 5/15/2017
I'm liking this so far. I am also reading the super long story about the twins and Hermione, but I needed a break, so I'm here reading something shorter. The one constructive thing I have to say is that it seems like you use "him" and "her" in ways they shouldn't be used in both stories. For example, "Him and Hermione went to the movies" should be "He and Hermione went to the movies." Just as you wouldn't say "Him went to the movies," you wouldn't say "Him and Hermione went to the movies." That's just a pretend example, but I've noticed this error in so many people's stories and I guess it's my pet peeve. Everything else about your writing is really great.
Happy Auntie chapter 3 . 5/7/2017
Well the date went well there friends seem happy for them all in all I say that tit pretty good. I wonder if Katie really did have dragonpox and if Angela was really taking care of her cousin as Hermione said or did as Fred and George and Lee agreed said chicken out.
Happy Auntie chapter 2 . 5/7/2017
Will that's good happy that Hermione decided to follow her heart instead ov her head snd take a chance with Oliver. Maybe hearing Genny's voice in her head telling, her more or less to go for it gaved herwhat she needed to gave Oliver a glad that Oliver came to her to tslk to her for it was shortof obvious that she was to afraid to go in see him on account of him being unhappy and mad with her after she left like she did. Im glad that he didn't regret kissing her and that he reall6want yo try gaveing she and him a chance. I hope that it sll goes well it is obvious to me that they like each other but, just in case I worng about how much I hope that they are able to still be friends.
Happy Auntie chapter 1 . 5/7/2017
A Oliver and Hermione fanfic is knda new to me, I usually pichet her with Ron (obvious I know) Fred or George or (only back in time of the Marauders) Siriusor Remus but. I read and reread a lot of you stories (you a GREAT writer) and love all of the ones that I gave readed so I figured I gave this one a read.
I like it do far love that they are baking for charity for children, I love baking, I love children, and charity is cool. Like there little food fight that led to a kiss. Just sad that Hermione left saying "I can't" when it was so obvious to us readers that she like him and the kiss. I wounder what the others are making are they sll cookies or are the different tips of bake goods. Hope that Hermione see's that she can and does.
belladonablush chapter 3 . 7/22/2016
An absolutely adorable story!
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 3 . 10/28/2014
So cute! Good work! :)
Not Just A Reader - A Fangirl chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
What? Wha-? What just happened? She just had an amazing kiss, whydid she leave-? What?
Pussycat Pippin chapter 3 . 2/11/2014
I like this story it is very sweet and cute and it was very funny as well it made me happy and I like being happy it was va joy to read thanks for wrighting it. Bye bye.
accioweasleys4 chapter 3 . 11/12/2013
This is really cute! I always wondered about these two ever since Wood kissed Hermione for using that spell on Harry's glasses in the third book. (I think it was the third book and I think he kissed her from happiness. Sorry if the reference is wrong. I'm tired!) Good job!
LovingPillow chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
Chocolate could solve any problem in Double Fudge ;P
sparrowkess chapter 3 . 3/8/2013
I would love to read more please!
Lilly Luna chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
This is an amazing story so far :D
I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
Angels-heart1 chapter 3 . 6/25/2012
Great story! I loved it!
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