Reviews for Enemy Time
Samantha Novak chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
This was great. I think you could have added a little more though... For instance, what happens to Sashya when the parents come? Does Jareth see the amulet his son saw? (I'm assuming "Junior" was Sarah and Jareth's son.) I think you should have developed more of the two trying to search for Sashya, Jareth's fears of becoming mortal, and his reaction when the time is up. It's a wonderful story and very well written, but I think it can be much better.
notwritten chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Its good. What happened to Sashya. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)