your Shepard is shit also Ashly was in the right

Too bad this story seems to have died, it was getting really good

Fuck this Shepard! He needs to be killed before he ruins the whole galaxy!

It's so creepy seeing John now. I think you nailed transhuman dread so well here. We know he's human but... not human enough. Not after those modifications.

Also, I love how the SGC is slowly turning into X-COM.

Damn, I feel sorry for this Shepard. He's so deep into the 'hard men making hard decisions' mindset that he's alienating his own people.

Heck, the SGC folks are slowly crawling their way into the hearts of the Normandy crew and for good reason.

I love how John Sheppard is being portrayed. He's always calm and knows how to act on the Normandy because every military veteran is aware that the new guy will always get shit on. But, in time they will earn respect and acceptance.

Not gonna lie. This story managed to portray Elizabeth Weir in a better light. She always comes off as a pest in other stories.

But in this story, she actually has her priorities straight and is quite helpful.

Great story. Are you going to finish it?

WOW! I finally caught up with this and boy are these last two chapters a doozy. I had a feeling somebosy attacking Earth would end up being the push they'd need to fully enter the war but yikes! Hopefully it's not quite as bad as it looks; it would take a long time for a city as spread out as the greater LA area to be totally leveled after all!

But I'm most worried for my boy, John! LOKI THIS IS WHY YOU DO NOY GIVE FULL BODY CYBORG MODE TO A MAN HAVING A MENTAL BREAKDOWN! Please don't let him die! I'm worried for him and think he needs a break but being shoved into a cloned body with his same messed up terminator stuff... poor John!

This story is just way too dark for me.

I’ve been reading your fic on and off and I’ve greatly enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next update.

I have been greatly enjoying this story. I love how you mesh these two universes together in a way that is unique and original, that is what fanfiction is all about. Keep up the good work

Hey there! Great chapter! I liked the bit with Weir and O'Neill, jumping out of an airplane. Thanks for writing!

shit

Love

Are you shitting me? No offense but I hated this update. Prometheus gone, the 302s cut in half, hundreds of millions dead and now Earth out of the fight. For nothing. If Ba'als goal was to strike against the Reaper alliance then he failed miserably. Cause he got nothing from Earth. There was zero point to this attack. And the Goa'uld seemed way more competent than they otherwise are. This just seems so pointless.