|Reviews for Corin|
| BlackRevenant chapter 14 . 3/31/2014
This went SO much better than the game.
I enjoyed seeing Loghain torn apart, dismantled in such a way that almost annihilated hia reputation past and present.
Hated him ao much. Like your Corin I understood him, saw how his mind worked. But I hated the bastard all the more, he shat on his own legend.
| BlackRevenant chapter 13 . 3/31/2014
I hate Religion.
Hate it with a passion.
Men twist and pervert it for their own ends. Grinding up people and beliefs with an abandon and depravity equalled only by mans capacity for choice.
Now faith. Faith is a beautiful thing. And at its core CANNOT be tainted.
And I think it was a show of faith that moment with the OC, rather than a show of religious belief.
| BlackRevenant chapter 12 . 3/31/2014
Stole the show indeed.
That there is some Naruto level charisma.
| BlackRevenant chapter 11 . 3/31/2014
Oh that was hot.
Frigid women dont exist imo. They just havent found the right lover, the right kink.
Corin played her like a fiddle and she /loved/ it. Already I can see Anora is the type for passionate and sensual love making. Calin sounded like he was more into that rough rutting.
Well done. Fluff (check) Angst (check) and Erotica (goddammit check!) Perfect romance.
| BlackRevenant chapter 10 . 3/31/2014
That theory for Calien and why he wanted the Warden (more so for Human Noble) is kinda sharp. Very sharp actually.
Makes me wonder what would be the reason for any other origin.
Morrigan is a good character. You showcased her well. She'll probably be wondering "what if" for the rest of her life. I dont think that is a wound that will ever close. For either of them.
Your Cousland is close to my own temperament wise, just some minor personality tweaks and different decisions made to showcase their differences.
Probably why I enjoy Corin.
| BlackRevenant chapter 8 . 3/31/2014
GO ALISTAIR GO!
Leli will teach you all kinds of things.
Reminds me of my first time. Was with an experienced/older woman too. Thank her still for those lessions learned.
| BlackRevenant chapter 7 . 3/31/2014
You torture yourself love. Truly you do.
Practical to the point of delusion. Truthful to the point of lying to one's self.
And Corin, a true blue noble. Trapped by both his heart and his duty. Sucks when they dont align.
| BlackRevenant chapter 6 . 3/31/2014
LOVED Emons tear down.
Highlight of the chapter.
Anora and her rambling thoughts were hilarious in that "but shes always together" kinda way.
| BlackRevenant chapter 5 . 3/31/2014
Mr. Swooping is bad homself is gonna get him some nookie!
Got a giggle out of the "Lord Cousland" reveal, from all players on that one.
I still prefer my own personal Warden to be a Warrior first and whatever else second (elf or noble) which is probably why Morrigan is my fav LI. Cause of everything that she is truthful to the extreme (her feelings or otherwise) and dont sugarcoat shit. Lelianna was too caught up in the Maker firsthand. She was better after she got hardened though.
With all that said. Something powerful about how ypu present your Cousland. His presence is magnificent.
| BlackRevenant chapter 2 . 3/31/2014
Angstyness with Morrigan.
She's my favorite LI, kinda awesome to see that pain in Corin, and a little in Morrigan.
| Lazy Spark chapter 53 . 3/31/2014
I just re-read this for the umpteenth time. God I love this story!
| BlackRevenant chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
Human Noble was/is my second favorite Origin.
City Elf being first and Mage third (race doesn't matter much)
This is like the first DAO story I've ever bothered to read. Half cause I can't find the "right" story (lots of slash/femslash) and half cause they tend to be crap.
This however looks promising. Might have all the makings of a good romance (Some fluff, some angst, and some erotica) which is a HUGE plus.
| JordanMathias chapter 53 . 2/16/2014
Sorry I've missed a few chapters but this is some amazing work you've done. Especially with all the new characters. I find your Empress Celene how I expect dragon age to portray her. Also you have me on emotional roller coasters with Corin, with Anora, Morrigan, and with Henriette you could obviously see something happening. Amazing
| Shadow Tricked chapter 53 . 2/13/2014
Ahh please update again soon lol had to re read the last chapter to male sure I was up to date
| Guest chapter 53 . 2/7/2014
Nerissa seems a bit underpowered for a Senior Enchanter. She's got the full Primal Line, the 3 to Spell Might in Spirit, and Mind Blast. BTW, there's no Spirit Blast or Burning Hands in DAO-I imagine those spells are your invention. I count about 20-21 spells, and you can have up to 35 in Origins. The Arcane Warrior/Shapeshifter specs can be pretty tough, but your sustainables will drop when you might spend some more time learning spells if she plans to go to Awakenings.