|Reviews for Corin|
| thepkrmgc chapter 31 . 6/27/2014
i think that alistairs theory has a lot more weight when you consider that the archdemon used to be Urthmiel: the tevinter god of beauty. while nobody would like to be twisted by the spawn it would be extra horrifying to a creature defined by it's beauty
seeing anora's talk with morrigan was very interesting, its good for drama and character development to boot!
while this is the first fic ive read where eleanor survived im not sure whether its good for the story, but i'll give you the benifit of the doubt untill i hear the reveal of how they survived
| thepkrmgc chapter 30 . 6/27/2014
good to see what was happening in denerim during that jump cut, anora's reaction upon hearing the news of her pregnancy was priceless!
| thepkrmgc chapter 29 . 6/27/2014
wade is always good for some comic relief: i wonder what he would have done with the starmetal?
| thepkrmgc chapter 28 . 6/27/2014
ive wondered what the actual ritual was like, i think that your intepretation is as good as any
| thepkrmgc chapter 27 . 6/27/2014
i would never think it was possible for me to sympathize with morrigan but seeing the relationship from her perspective gives her enough characterization for me to pity her...
| thepkrmgc chapter 26 . 6/27/2014
while the dark ritual is an incredibly bad idea and things as powerful as the soul of an old god should be destroyed, of all the depictions of it that i've seen this is the only one where i cant object to it occurring: the drama makes it interesting and its completely in character for both participants
| thepkrmgc chapter 25 . 6/27/2014
two ogre jump-kills in quick succession is quite impressive, i have to say its cooler with a two handed sword and rather funny if your character happens to be wielding a maul
| thepkrmgc chapter 24 . 6/27/2014
the songs are very fitting, and have a nice tune to them, i hope you write more later on!
| thepkrmgc chapter 23 . 6/27/2014
its good to see that the cousland bro's cleared the air, and the chantry bit was very well done!
| thepkrmgc chapter 22 . 6/27/2014
fergus coming back really adds to the drama, he would have been anora's husband if not for cailan and they are clearly fast friends
| thepkrmgc chapter 21 . 6/27/2014
yay for fergus's timely arrival! and great character development for both corin and his bro's
| thepkrmgc chapter 20 . 6/27/2014
thats a decent explanation as any for why riordan only offers the joining to loghain
| thepkrmgc chapter 19 . 6/26/2014
i really like that you thought to tell pooka's origin story, and cant imagine how anyone could have done it better. granted, as a devout dog lover, i am rather biased toward anything mabari related
| thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 6/26/2014
while its good to see that the royal couple are enjoying themselves, morrigan is just sick: i get that she has no concept of social norms but there are lines that you just dont cross
| thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 6/26/2014
ive occasionally wondered why there were no horses in ferelden or kirkwall (or nondecorative spears for that matter), its stuff like this that makes me wish they were
those last quotes are quite accurate but amusing considering that this fic is anything but tacky and the standard tropes are used sparingly (or otherwise very well hidden)