|Reviews for Corin|
| thepkrmgc chapter 40 . 6/27/2014
when fics have their characters talking to god/religious-figure-of-your-choice things tend to go down the toilet very quickly, but its only fitting that andraste would take an active interest in the blight and that a pious hero having a near death experience would talk to her. you have managed to be very tasteful and i doubt that the concept/scene could have been dealt with better
| thepkrmgc chapter 39 . 6/27/2014
good work on the post battle stuff, and i suspect that there will be quite a few new wardens among the wounded
| thepkrmgc chapter 38 . 6/27/2014
i knew i was on to something when i predicted that nerissa/alistair, granted that would mean that my alistair/cauthrien is horribly wrong...
its good to see a final meeting between morrigan and alistair: despite their differences there is a measure of respect after the events of the blight
| thepkrmgc chapter 37 . 6/27/2014
its good of you to realise that the dark ritual is far from a guarantee of survival from the characters perspective, and that its unlikely that the wardins could just sit back and talk over who makes the final blow. a great depiction of the final battle that does better then the game
| thepkrmgc chapter 36 . 6/27/2014
i like how your showing things from nerissas pov: i hope she sticks around but i suspect that she will meet her end on the rooftop
| thepkrmgc chapter 35 . 6/27/2014
i take it thats a no on the dwarf origins survival, i suppose it would have been a longshot...
| thepkrmgc chapter 34 . 6/27/2014
good to see the dalish doing their part, but im glad that we didnt see the mahariel: as cool as it would have been theres no way that he/she could have survived their origin without duncan
| thepkrmgc chapter 33 . 6/27/2014
yay for the perky surana!, i hope that she can earn a place as court mage of ferelden, is there any chance that the tabris was rescued with soris from howe's dungeons or that one of the dwarf origins is with the legion of the dead?
| thepkrmgc chapter 32 . 6/27/2014
good justification for eleanor, even if glimor's survival is a bit much: im a fan of tragedy but i suppose that two other survivors dont compensate for the utter destruction of highever
nice pre battle oratory on corin's part, and in eager to see the army in action
| thepkrmgc chapter 31 . 6/27/2014
i think that alistairs theory has a lot more weight when you consider that the archdemon used to be Urthmiel: the tevinter god of beauty. while nobody would like to be twisted by the spawn it would be extra horrifying to a creature defined by it's beauty
seeing anora's talk with morrigan was very interesting, its good for drama and character development to boot!
while this is the first fic ive read where eleanor survived im not sure whether its good for the story, but i'll give you the benifit of the doubt untill i hear the reveal of how they survived
| thepkrmgc chapter 30 . 6/27/2014
good to see what was happening in denerim during that jump cut, anora's reaction upon hearing the news of her pregnancy was priceless!
| thepkrmgc chapter 29 . 6/27/2014
wade is always good for some comic relief: i wonder what he would have done with the starmetal?
| thepkrmgc chapter 28 . 6/27/2014
ive wondered what the actual ritual was like, i think that your intepretation is as good as any
| thepkrmgc chapter 27 . 6/27/2014
i would never think it was possible for me to sympathize with morrigan but seeing the relationship from her perspective gives her enough characterization for me to pity her...
| thepkrmgc chapter 26 . 6/27/2014
while the dark ritual is an incredibly bad idea and things as powerful as the soul of an old god should be destroyed, of all the depictions of it that i've seen this is the only one where i cant object to it occurring: the drama makes it interesting and its completely in character for both participants