|Reviews for Corin|
| lazyguy90 chapter 22 . 1/4/2012
So Anora and Fergus have a Past do they? One with a capital P? Interesting. Great work as always. Keep at it.
| karthik9 chapter 22 . 1/4/2012
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
| Zukafew119 chapter 18 . 1/4/2012
Great Romance Scene. I have to say this is the best Anora fic on Fanfiction.
| Mike chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Never reviewed the early chapters, so I'll say some on them. The 1st chapter is really what hooks you-I think the only comparable 1st chapter in fanfic is the 1st in The Keening Blade. The whole scene starts out Anora trying to enlist the Warden's support, but the fact that Corin is clever enough to figure out what happened at Howe's really puts her on the defensive.
The marriage proposal really seems to surprise her-especially since Corin reveals her original plot at Howe's was to incapacitate Howe and/or himself. The final scene returning Calian's effects also helps Corin in Anora's eyes. It's really one of my favorite chapters in the story.
| Zukafew119 chapter 17 . 1/4/2012
I liked the conversation between Corin and Anora, especially the last part of it: "You are not getting the best part of the bargain, Corin. I'm ten years your senior." "Eleven. Until next week, that is." "I beg your pardon? My agents told me you were nineteen." Her fiancé shrugged. "They told you wrong. I'm eighteen until next week." Anora dropped her face into her hands. "Maker! I'm robbing the cradle!" Also, I liked the part where Alister seeks sanctuary with Corin to escape Wyne's cloches. At the end of this chapter, it was nice to have the cliche: The golden-haired queen and her stalwart young knight, sweeping over the land together upon his mighty black stallion?"
| Zukafew119 chapter 16 . 1/4/2012
It was an interesting way you had Anora show the landsmeet who would be her husband and I liked it. Also I like how Anora has been thawed out by Corin. It was a good idea you came up with several layers to line of succession in Fereldon. I love Wulff's reaction to this and Teagan's responds to him: "And people are acting like grown-ups about the succession? Putting the good of the country first? Has Ferelden ever had such a thing before?" "Not in my memory," Teagan quipped. More laughter. I liked the banter between Alister and Corin and the end of the chapter, particularly this quote from Alister:"All right. I knew that both of you could be scary by yourselves, but together…together you are a force of scariness the like of which the world has never seen." This chapter I give 10 out of 10!
| Zukafew119 chapter 15 . 1/4/2012
| Zukafew119 chapter 14 . 1/4/2012
I like how you added Riordan in the Landsmeet before the fight; to me he should have been able to speak up in the game before the fight. I like how you made Alfstanna more important in the landsmaeet; I always did like her. You did an outstanding job doing this! 10 of 10!
| Zukafew119 chapter 13 . 1/4/2012
I like how Genitvi said that Howe was an extraordinary: Very few people achieve that level of depravity. I Really like having Corin tell Genitvi some of his fears and Genitvi talking to him about it's not a sin being a survivor. I like the informal blessing Sister Agnetha did: "The Maker and his Bride watch over you today," she said earnestly, leaning close to his ear, an expression of absolute sincerity on her face. "May you make wise decisions. May you help others make wise decisions as well. And I really hope you won't have to use this sword. But if you do, may They keep you safe." I loved the chantry part of this chapter; you did a great job on it! I like what Ogren say's to Eamon's troops: "Form up on the Queen, ya nug-humpers!" Over all this was one of the best chapter's if not the best you have written for this story.
| Zukafew119 chapter 12 . 1/4/2012
I like how you have Teagan as a person who has a good sense of humor. You came up with a good idea with having Alister as a backup for Corin in the line of succession for who is the ruler of Ferelden, a Very good and Very original idea, which makes perfect logical sense. It was nice having Eamon owning up to say he had lost his right determine Alister's fate when he put him in the chantery and saying that Maric would be proud of what Alister has done. Also, the letter you had Corin make to his brother, was a very good idea.
| Zukafew119 chapter 11 . 1/4/2012
I liked the Corin brushing Anora's hair, I kind of agree with Anora with hair, having someone brush or cut it is something that you only allow other people to do, that you trust totally. I have to say that inmate scene between Anora and Corin was the most erotic scene that I have read, with both people having their cloths on. Having Alister rasing Corin at the end of the chapter was a nice touch!
| mille libri chapter 21 . 1/4/2012
Love this! Perfect way to keep that whole Redcliffe ridiculousness from happening, and I love the obvious affection and light-heartedness. Fits perfectly with the family dynamic as seen in the origin story.
| Zukafew119 chapter 10 . 1/4/2012
I like the conversation between Anora and Alister, you had Alister true to his nature. I like how Corin tells Anora his plans at the landsmeet and is brutally honest and unbending in that her father must be held accountable for what he has done.
| Psyche Sinclair chapter 21 . 1/3/2012
This story is quite excellent. I'm glad that I found it. :)
I like your characterisation of Anora, and her relationship with Erlina- and I like how your Cousland rightly upturns everything. I even liked the way you managed to avoid Alistair's tantrum-during-the-Landsmeet, and your adoption of Cauthrien. You've done well, establishing Alistair's character and relationship with the Warden, with Leliana, with Riordan and Duncan.
Thank you for the delightful read.
| Belisante chapter 21 . 1/3/2012
Great story so far!