Reviews for Thank You! Until We Meet Again
DiamondBackNeko-chi chapter 35 . 7/19/2016
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Guest chapter 35 . 11/6/2015
Wirting a story about death the kid from soul eater
neverendingjourney chapter 35 . 7/11/2015
You r an amazing writer ... Just amazing:) :) :) i was not able to stop myslef from reading your story... I completed reading the fafic in just one day ... I can say that it is the best fanfic i have ever read in my life ... If i was a movie director i would have definetly made this fanfic into a movie. I just loved the story ... I am telling u i am one of your biggest fan .. :):):) i request u to write more stories like this ... Thank u very very very very much for writing thi story..
SuperSonicSmash chapter 3 . 4/22/2015
Timon doesn't have an "e" in his name.
SuperSonicSmash chapter 2 . 4/22/2015
Doremi's (Ichigo's) hairbands were more magenta than purple.
Kadaj5 chapter 35 . 10/20/2014
So it's finally over now. Doremi has made it through her ordeal and that life-threatening tumor is finally no more. The second bout of amnesia was an interesting spin and served for a nice surprise when she planted one on Kotake. That was amusing, as was when that bout wore off and she remembered everything. Her seeing Hana and Pop and making that the trigger that ended the amnesia once and for was perfect, and the emotion of this final scenes could be felt through the words and characters.

I know how it feels to have to do an overhaul. I'm stuck in the middle of several myself. If you need help with it, I'll be more than happy to give it. There are still spelling and grammar mistakes, even in this chapter. The one that stands out here is one where you used "we're" when "were" would have been more appropriate.

Also, that end bit LOL! The Doctor Who shout out there was nice touch, too.
Innermoka-chan chapter 35 . 10/20/2014
This was awsome the last part of the end was verry funny
mysteryreader6626 chapter 24 . 10/12/2014
What is going on...I am so lost! But I like how they finally meet.
mysteryreader6626 chapter 21 . 10/12/2014
What just happened...
mysteryreader6626 chapter 5 . 10/12/2014
Even if you love KotaDore, things just got interesting. ;P
mysteryreader6626 chapter 4 . 10/12/2014
Good story, and you will probaly think I am a spoil sport, but if you do win the lottery, mor it is the more the goverment takes it away before you never spend it.
Flabbaboy chapter 34 . 9/29/2014
I haven't reviewed in a while. I hate that you left it at a cliff hanger. My heart was pounding when that actor doctor came in. Kotake should have beaten him more. Other than that enjoying the story. Take your time and update soon.
Innermoka-chan chapter 34 . 9/26/2014
Can't wait for the next one u make the best fanfictions ja ne
Kadaj5 chapter 34 . 9/25/2014
If you're having trouble with Google, then can I suggest Microsoft Word? That's what I use to write all of my fanfics and so far it's much safer to use, far FAR less of a chance of it all being deleted. Literally, the only way you would lose the text is if you failed to save it or the file gets corrupted. That hasn't happened to me so far, so I'd say it's reliable.

So it's finally almost over. The penultimate chapter has been read and reviewed. The finale...It is quite possibly the most notable Ojamajo Doremi fanfic out there. It was started by Deep Sadness, and you saved it from going to waste. And with the support of your readers, it grew into what it is today: A notable and memorable fic.

The one complaint I have about this chapter is the presence of a wall of text. Those are VERY difficult and often headache-inducing to read. To make it more manageable, try and split the wall into smaller parts. Not putting an end quotation and then beginning another paragraph with the opening quotation will let the reader know that whomever is speaking is still speaking.

For example:
Mr. Nerf turned to the audience and said, "Insert first paragraph here.

"Insert second paragraph here."

It's a short example, I know, but I hope it helps in the future.

You have all of our good will.

Innermoka-chan chapter 33 . 9/19/2014
I love it can't wait for the next one Nya :3
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